Save Me.. Poem by AMyth Kulkarni

Save Me..

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On the sidewalk, I stood alone
And saw her walk across the road,
I viewed their arms entangled
And homewards I strode,

All throughout my heart cried
And cursed me all along,
I knew my guilt because
I had punished it too long

Love’s what I detested,
It only breeds pain
But in pain I am now too,
My heart lies here slain.

Save me from myself,
I am my biggest enemy,
I am the cancer
Which itself is killing me.

Save me from myself,
I am my biggest enemy,
I am the storm
Drowning myself in the sea.

As I trudged along
Down poured the rain,
To my ocean of sorrow
It was just a grain.

As I look in the dark sky
The clashes one hears,
Raindrops wet my face
And become one with my tears.

On the sidewalk, I still stand alone,
Inside I hear a painful moan.
I gave a deep sigh
And felt something inside me die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 29 June 2006

aakash...thats nice... well written poetry...enjoyed it...keep writing...welcome to PH, hope you have a great time here...nalini...(my son is aakash too)

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P K 29 June 2006

Wow what a poem! You have expressed your feelings so beautifully! I liked the 4 lines as 'As I look in the dark sky The clashes one hears, Raindrops wet my face And become one with my tears.' Keep it up

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Melissa Broomhead 29 June 2006

wow......... i can really relate i no exactly how it feels this is a great poem wonderful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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