Silent Night Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Silent Night

Rating: 5.0


Night whispered in ears
I have no moon light
Or the twinkling stars
To make you feel glee

Night whispered in ears
I have no thunder
Or the sparking light
To rain along with you

Night whispered in ears
I have no moving breeze
Or the singing demons
To make you fall asleep

Night whispered in ears
I have no mercies on you
Or the kind heart for you
To make your beat calm

Then I whispered back
I have you with me
Or at least this silence
To help me in growing old

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhavani R 10 November 2009

'Then I whispered back I have you with me Or Atleast this Silence....' Loneliness is our illusion...we always have something or other with us...we just do not always realise it..... Its a very reflective composition..very well expressed...

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Joseph Poewhit 10 November 2009

Silence is golden - so they say

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Janell Cressman 10 November 2009

thats a really really good poem! ! ! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 10 November 2009

I have you with me Or at least this silence To help me in growing old 10+++++++

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Antonio Liao 10 November 2009

wow! my vow of silent linger in the midst of the daylight.....i am carried out with my emotion...you have just move me.....to let silent brings me back of knowing of what is life.....a very excellent started of the day...... may this poem bring gladness to mankind...in this season of Christmas..... thank you and God will always bless you....a big Star and a 10 +++++

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Catrina Heart 16 November 2009

silence is our companion in our slumber and solitude..........well done!

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Louis Rams 11 November 2009

as we get older silence becomes our companion. truth in your words. a ten

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Eyan Desir 11 November 2009

Its a bit twisted... making the reader ponder good job...

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Anju Addanki 10 November 2009

The last stanza i liked it very much very good

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rago rago 10 November 2009

well crafted and in silence we grow....in night as a friend we grow.......with every long night...........

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