Smiling Face Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Smiling Face

Rating: 5.0


I was cut in to size
When they said no to oblige
The father had gone for monetary help
“No, no we have not opened charity” the friend almost slapped

The father was about to break down
Such kind of insult was never known
He was down to earth and simple
Through out the life he had struggled

I was bright student
But economic condition was bad at present
Father consoled me with words
“Life is too precious” to move forward

He was not educated well
But by experience he could almost tell
The truth behind and reveal on face
He will not hesitate to chase

I saw his hidden pain
It was not my aim
I felt so much about his agony
I prayed from heart to almighty

“I will join the army” I disclosed
All were stunned and indisposed
No, no you are only son in the family
We are leading life very happily

I could remember father’s face
He had withdrawn from the race
“I must help the family in any case’ I had decided
The option for joining army was beginning of new phase

I look back and think of the past
The plight had peacefully ended fast
I am happy and graced
I pray at father’s smiling face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

I was cut in to size When they said no to oblige

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Rohani Daud Wonderful words 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Mitos Jane Tugade Nepomuceno Still, my amazing poet :))) 9 hours ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Hasmukh Mehta WELOME LISA LOMBARDI, NEHA MEHTA, JAIRAM TIWARI, SHUJAT AHMED N ' a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

55555 stars Cavaleiro Da Noite13 minutes ago Nice work Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Smiling Face jacquelynn ruff19 minutes ago This shows how much he did care for his family. He needed to help and he made a tough choice by being the only son and join the army to help support his family. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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