Too Long Poem by John Kipling Lewis

Too Long

Rating: 3.2


I could not touch her
but I gazed into her eyes

distant and beautiful

warm and giving

in my dream
I fell in love with the sun

I woke this morning blind and cried alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K Holoholo 06 November 2007

I like it, it seems perfect to me.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

2. Nothing original.

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