Trainspotting Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

Trainspotting

Rating: 4.9


Upon the platform here I wait
And watch the rain come pouring down,
No other soul for company
To pass the time away,
The slatted bench on which I sit
With peeling paint all scrawled and etched,
Beside the bin that overflows
With litter and decay.

The hands upon the clock above
Seem frozen for so slow to move,
To click each minute passing by
It mocks relentlessly,
As puddles gather one by one
Beyond the shelter of the roof,
Where wind does blow the paper cups
Which yields more misery.

I hiver with the bitter cold
And blow my hands to keep them warm,
Yet still I find no respite from
This bleak November's eve,
Desrted in the desperate throws
Of winter how I long to be,
Back home again but still I wait
For I just cannot leave.

I gaze unto the silver rails
That wind into the distance there,
With sleepers stained so thick with oil
Yet still no train in sight,
While over on the other line
A Deltic trundles slowly past,
And pulling coal in blackened trucks
With all its strength and might.

With whistling wheels and buffer chinks
The diesel coughs and cackles by,
While points do clang and clunk so loud
And choking smoke of blue,
That drifts across these empty lines
I hold my breath until it clears,
And wach the train as it does go
Then disappear from view.

And then the hush descends again
Upon the empty platform here,
While circles in the puddles stare
With every dropp that falls,
The red light shines from out the gloom
As I look down the track ahead,
And wait and wait but nothing comes
A captive of these walls.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 26 March 2008

I felt the loneliness of this one Andrew, like feeling part of a by-gone age Your poetry shows such emotion Thankyou Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 19 March 2008

Lovely write Andrew, there is great rhythm in writing about the railways. they give one plenty of things to write about. This poem is great you have given excellent imagery, one can picture the whole scene. You might like to read my poem called 'The 6.15 from Paddington - Steam Days' if you have a moment. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 19 March 2008

A powerfully captivating write Andy, brilliantly depicted! ! ! *10* Best regards, Friend Thad

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Effulgent imagery & intrical depiction, highlights this tell-tale gem...Excellent Work, my friend! Always a pleasure to read quality verse such as yours. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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