When I Needed You Poem by Eric Maffettone

When I Needed You

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When I was weak, you were strong, when I felt, I did not belong, You were there.

When I was scared, you were brave, when I felt, I needed saved, You reassured me.

When I was blind, you could see, when I felt, no one needed me, You did.

When I was shy, you were bold, when I felt, alone and cold, you showed me.

When I was ashamed, you were proud, when I felt, I did not amount, you proved me wrong.

When I hurt inside, you felt alive, when I felt, I had died, you revived me.

When I felt worthless, you felt sad, when I felt, I lost what I had, you helped me.

When I was alone, you were by my side, when I felt, I needed to confide, you let me.

When I felt like crying, you felt my pain, when I felt, I shouldn't complain, you told me to.

when I felt like giving up, you believed in me, when I felt, I was not free, you showed me I was.

When I needed you, you were there, when I felt, no one cared, you did.

Monday, March 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My teacher was always so good to me. I only had him for 1 year, but in that time, never once did he judge me for anything, nor did he hold any grudges against me for anything I may have done. He treated me like I was just like everyone else. A human being. no more, no less. I can't thank him enough. Even without realizing it, when I needed him most, he was there for me. He always managed to make me laugh when I needed to the most. He made his class fun too. I won't ever forget what he did for me. I couldn't, even if I tried.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 24 March 2014

What a great tribute to your teacher. A profession that doesn't often get enough appreciation. I'm sure he would be happy to know what an impact he made in your life! Lovely job with this!

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Gajanan Mishra 24 March 2014

very good writing, thanks.

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