Hi Soumita........you write very beautifully indeed. I enjoyed reading both A Canvas of Failure and Bye Aishu: the former for the sadness of relentless adversity and the latter for its poignancy.
May i also request that you try to wade through my didactic poem, Verses on the *Universe. It describes the birth and death of our Universe and the trillions of years in- between. I tried to keep it poetic though it reaches the frontiers of contemporary scientific knowledge. Perhaps you might also glance through the humorous ones like Cossipore & the Migress, A Bus Ride in Kolkata etc, etc.. Thanks and let me know what you feel.