Soumita Sarkar Ray

Veteran Poet - 1,957 Points (Kolkata)

Comments about Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Rookie - 0 Points Biswajit Basu (5/17/2013 12:26:00 AM)

    Hi Soumita........you write very beautifully indeed. I enjoyed reading both A Canvas of Failure and Bye Aishu: the former for the sadness of relentless adversity and the latter for its poignancy.

    May i also request that you try to wade through my didactic poem, Verses on the *Universe. It describes the birth and death of our Universe and the trillions of years in- between. I tried to keep it poetic though it reaches the frontiers of contemporary scientific knowledge. Perhaps you might also glance through the humorous ones like Cossipore & the Migress, A Bus Ride in Kolkata etc, etc.. Thanks and let me know what you feel.

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Death Of Morality

The core is red
Shame has shed
One life has changed
And one has damaged

One fine day
it so such happened
One dares to say
A candle was lightened

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