Steven Elsner

Rookie - 0 Points (08-02-93 / St. Claire Shores)

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  • Rookie Amanda Debarr (2/12/2011 3:47:00 PM)

    Hey I just started writing poems and I'm not sure how good they are. I've looked at some of urs and they are good. I was wondering if u could take a look at mine and let me know what u Think? It would be greatly appreciated.

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Renewal Is A Grand Feat

Renewal is a grand feat
To be able to rise to their feet
Those with this remarkable trait
Shall find those without it innate

Renewal is a grand feat
To start anew without missing a beat
I only hope to attain this quality
For I find such harm quite bodily

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