Hey I just started writing poems and I'm not sure how good they are. I've looked at some of urs and they are good. I was wondering if u could take a look at mine and let me know what u Think? It would be greatly appreciated.
One who hungers for distress Shall meet an untimely unrest For it is they who will be set by the wayside With no friends and nowhere to hide
One who lusts for power Shall not blossom like a flower But instead lose meaning They will find love fleeting