Steven Elsner

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  • Amanda Debarr (2/12/2011 3:47:00 PM)

    Hey I just started writing poems and I'm not sure how good they are. I've looked at some of urs and they are good. I was wondering if u could take a look at mine and let me know what u Think? It would be greatly appreciated.

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That Special Kiss

When I hold my lips close to you
I know that you are my dream come true
When I hold your hand in mine
I wonder if this is in the grand design

The second our lips meet
My heart does more than skip a beat
The love between us is eternal
the magnetism is infernal

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