Susan Alldred Lugton

Rookie - 20 Points (1946 / Dunedin New Zealand)

Comments about Susan Alldred Lugton

  • Rookie - 13 Points David Keig (4/19/2011 6:22:00 AM)

    please get in touch with me

    d xxx

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  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (5/24/2005 7:43:00 AM)

    Hi! As a silly-billy myself, loved your sillyness poem, and wanted to suggest:
    'so sweetly' for one of the 'completely' s; and
    in the last line 'for forty winks'...

    Michael

Two Doves in Love

I noticed something in the park today,
Two sweet little doves involved. in play.
They sauntered around just a foot apart,
as if something was about to start

His feathers ruffled, almost on end.
She flirted, danced, saying my love I send.
They met and kissed with their beaks entwined.
I watched, enchanted, it filled my mind.

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