TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila . (25TH OF APRIL / PaLeSTiNe)

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  • Gwendoline Rose Mardell (12/10/2011 5:57:00 AM)

    Alot of feeling and true life events in your poem. It must have been quite difficult in some parts to write. Amazing how you stayed as the one orphan. Very impresive poem and well done.look forward to your next one. keep up the great writing.

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  • Cheryl Griffith (5/6/2010 7:15:00 AM)

    Interesting style the way you play with rhyme, reminds me of dada poems which does not sems to make too much sense but actually makes lots of sense.

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  • Dickson Mseti (4/26/2010 4:18:00 AM)

    POETS HAVE ONE THING IN COMMON. LOVE FOR THE PEOPLE AND THEY ARE LIKE SOLDIERS IN WAR.THEY RESCUE EACH OTHER, HELP EACH OTHER AND DIE FOR THE WHOLE COMMUNITY.THANK YOU FOR BEING A POET.

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  • Faeo 'Lyre' Clive (4/11/2010 8:29:00 AM)

    Prove your alchemy
    to the wonders of
    your opposites.

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  • Ian Bowen (3/28/2010 4:46:00 AM)

    Your stats are a joke.

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  • Rocco Aiello (11/30/2009 1:33:00 AM)

    right on good job on the poem

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  • Rocco Aiello (11/30/2009 1:33:00 AM)

    right on good job on the poem

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  • Halana Williams (11/9/2009 3:22:00 PM)

    Your poem was full of emotion and i enjoyed reading it very much ^^ but the unneccessary capital words somewhat forced your message in a way of a turn off. Since this poem has a great and powerful message, you did a very impressive job in setting forth emotion to bring this piece alive. =)

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  • /Drea ~Princess/ (11/8/2009 3:02:00 PM)

    your writing is so gracious and full of understanding...you leave me speechless as always with your amazing imagery that inspires me^^

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  • Ezna Stephna (10/28/2009 1:10:00 AM)

    Nice expression poem keep it up.

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a crying orphan

(YEARS AGO)

..One day I thought of leaving, It was a moment, I closed my eyes, my self was torn to pieces, a part of me was taken away that moment I saw a crying orphan begging me to stay...

I found my self surrounded by all of you
your tears filled my eyes and in my turn started to cry asking how and why i forgot my place which is placed so high in the sky

you whispered to me..you are the giver and you will never be a miser,

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