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Theo Williams (14/05/94 / Australia)
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The Deceptive Eye
Eyes are the windows to each and every soul
That articulates a story in every perspective
Seeping when sad and tightened when angry
But can lie to us ‘cause they're deceptive.
For our eyes lie to each and every one of us
Unable to fathom what we're capable of
No one has seen what our eyes have seen
Which could vary from hatred to love.
I wonder if there is no one who read few of your poem and left without feel wonderful, i think no one, as i always dive deep into your paper pool swimming with your words, a warm languages that floating me with nice impression in each write you done. Your poems are powerful indicate that is much talent you got in hand, Just wish you to polish what you have and there will be no doubt, you will be huge in writing field_Soul, Unwritten Soul
Young but very promising indeed! You are sure to have great innings over this forum for long. Keep writing good and a few experimental poems too.
my theo, you ahve more talent than most people could ever dream of! :) im so proud of you! [3
Very nice poem Theo, good flow...good story line...keep up the good work.
Theo, if my comments to your poems 'segregation...', 'deceptive...' and 'sunset' have been registered (I'm not sure they have) then you'll know I feel you are a very talented poet... I don't think there is anything I could teach you, on the contrary, I would work hard maybe I could learn from you... Keep up the good work... Terry
You are a gifted poet Theo! I see you inspiring thousands good luck man keep up the brilliant work!
Your poems are truly amazing my friend! You are very gifted and a talented writer! keep the wonderful poems coming! !
Welcome to the site Theo, and I look forward to MORE of your poems, you are such a natural poet, your gonna knock me off the most popular poet list Im sure...smiles wouldnt see it any other way.