Thomas Viruvelil

Rookie (17.05.71 / Cochin, Kerala state, India)

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  • Rookie Linda Jenkinson (10/18/2005 9:58:00 AM)

    i enjoyed reading your poems very much, it is rare indeed this love you have for smi...i would dearly love to read more...maybe you could write about other aspects of your life and situation...best wishes and please keep writing...linda xxx

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Gillian.E. Shaw (9/21/2005 3:11:00 AM)

    Now you have written of your feelings and they are down on paper perhaps you should take a step back and write in more generalized terms. One can identify with feelings. However the human condition in general is something more solid and may add more weight and credibility to your poetry. To expand in order to express, to have the ability to move on will be a positive step. The focus then, should be more on form (which needs exploring) rather than on content.

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (9/8/2005 11:56:00 AM)

    Thomas, I have read all of your poems. They are very lovely. You are obviously very much in love with Smi. If she even loves you half as much as you do her, you will both be very happy. Very sweet to have such love and passion. I would be interested to read if you write poetry on other topics though? I'll keep my eye out for your work. Sincerely, Mary

One more day with you

Like a man sentenced to death
I count each day as if it is precious
It is a real pity
you cannot extract even a bit of love for me
Had I been the richest man in the world
I would have traded all my riches for your love for even a minute
Even this friendship is more than I can ever dream of
I think I dont even deserve this.
May be in another birth if I can negotiate with God

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