I suppose I can be short on this one.
I'm just a teenage girl, with a wish to write proper poetry some day. I'm planning on using this page to see what your opinion is on the attempts I make at that. As I'm still young, I guess my subjects can be a bit childish and all, but anyway...
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Tori Bachue Poems
Staggering around on an empty road With an empty heart, where are you? Around me, everything collapses in the smoke Of the world burning down, it's all so cold
Resentful, evil, tempting though Divine seduction, overcoming A sinner's choice, no use Inspired by your hate
You, standing there, as if you're not to blame As you move on, I know I'll never be the same Started to care more every minute of every day I know my feelings won't just sway
Doubt, that takes me over All because of your indifference Voice in distress, never sober You're still filled with ignorance
A landscape of clouds A vision of you My head, no longer filled with doubts I wonder if yours cleared up too
I wonder where you are My other half, a twin flame With storms that collide With chaos in peace
It's over, we're back where we were Even though the wound is still sore You've forgiven me, for what I didn't do You've forgotten I still love you
Oh stop, and let's rewind Just freeze, back when the planets were aligned Do you remember, that first time? Did you noticed that one sign?
Seems like yesterday, when I talked to you for one last time. I told you I was in love with you, you seemed to be fine. Then I crossed you at school, you were talking ‘bout me You ignored me, but why can't you see
Shot by Cupid For one reason or another He can't seem to strike twice Am I really that stupid?
Destiny is a funny thing You never know what to expect There are so many songs to sing Signs you'll neglect
Forever you'll be with me Taking part of my memories, a dark past To forget, to neglect and deny It's easier that way, to live a lie
Gliding, falling, to a new depth Reaching out for new stars Eyes that make me shake Giving away luck again
Time stops whenever I see you Heaven nor hell comes close as description Of how I feel, even when you hate me too My addiction
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Staggering around on an empty road
With an empty heart, where are you?
Around me, everything collapses in the smoke
Of the world burning down, it's all so cold
And yet my clothes are soaked
Can you see them, hiding behind my eyes?
The sky, glowing red, and
I feel myself falling down, it's like everything dies
But as I lie on the ground, I look up
And I see the stars, dancing around
And I see you, the angel shining bright
And there it is, the smile, playing on my face