Tori Bachue

Rookie - 22 Points (29/09/1994)

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I suppose I can be short on this one.
I'm just a teenage girl, with a wish to write proper poetry some day. I'm planning on using this page to see what your opinion is on the attempts I make at that. As I'm still young, I guess my subjects can be a bit childish and all, but anyway...
Any (constructive) criticism is welcome! more »

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The Dream

Staggering around on an empty road
With an empty heart, where are you?
Around me, everything collapses in the smoke
Of the world burning down, it's all so cold
And yet my clothes are soaked
Can you see them, hiding behind my eyes?
The sky, glowing red, and
I feel myself falling down, it's like everything dies
But as I lie on the ground, I look up
And I see the stars, dancing around
And I see you, the angel shining bright
And there it is, the smile, playing on my face

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