Vanessa Kingsley (March 16th / Colorado Springs, Colorado)
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You Don't Care (Ditch)
*I know there are grammatical errors and I'm sorry for that. Hopefully I got most of them and you can still understand it*
Outside the sun sparkles and shines on the green jade leaves that look like gems. I'm left alone inside and I'm by myself.
No one look sfor me
No one cares
No one sees me
Because no one dares
No one knows me because talkis cheap
Life is just a lie
u r a gud poet.............
lol your poetry is very strong and gripping. Write on and on!