Vijay Sai

Rookie - 56 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Comments about Vijay Sai

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rachel Adams (6/14/2014 8:19:00 AM)

    The contrast between the beauty and the horror of nature is powerful

    2 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 18 Points Keith Sifelani (6/10/2014 12:08:00 AM)

    Nicely written almost tasted the glossy reteat.

  • Freshman - 789 Points Rishad Mk (6/4/2014 5:52:00 AM)

    excellent poems! . your poems are highly inspirational to me.I have'nt english writing skill just like you.now i decided to write poetry just like you.

  • Veteran Poet - 1,237 Points Richard Beevor (6/2/2014 12:09:00 AM)

    Excellent poem on the new easy way to power our planet.

  • Veteran Poet - 1,237 Points Richard Beevor (6/2/2014 12:07:00 AM)

    Brilliant a poem and a recipe, making me very hungry, great idea.

  • Veteran Poet - 1,237 Points Richard Beevor (5/23/2014 11:06:00 PM)

    excellent work Vijay I know well the very army of wind machines that stride across the land here also, thanks for the invite to read, give mine a look if you wish.

  • Silver Star - 3,389 Points Paul Sebastian (4/22/2014 2:49:00 AM)

    You write with a beautiful poetic flair.
    Enjoyed reading. Keep them coming!

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/30/2013 12:55:00 PM)

    Poet Vijay Sai,
    One of the talented and gifted poet.
    It really a valuable gift you are blessed with.
    His poems flows freely on different topics,
    And are very pleasant to read.
    Thank you for many beautiful comments for my poems.
    May you keep on contributing valuable poems to the world of poems.
    Wishing you all the best
    God Bless you!

  • Rookie James Andrews (9/21/2013 1:25:00 PM)

    Like it a lot. I can taste it.

  • Rookie - 22 Points Pankaj Prasoon (5/23/2013 12:27:00 AM)

    A nice poem but ir should have been a bit longer..

Best Poem of Vijay Sai

A Desperate Cry

God's creation
Blessed to be born in this world
We all may feel that's the truth
Until I read this-
An abandoned baby
Malnourished, hardly an year old
Famine struck
Skin and bone
No food to feed
No water to have
Stranded alone in barren land
Helpless eyes staring straight
Standing legs more like a bamboo stick
Cerebral neurons popping out
Veins struggling to carry weak blood
Oh God! Nothing more I can add…
My heart is not strong enough
To read the rest-
A vampire vulture
Sitting beside and
Looking eager to end its hunger!
I pray!...

Read the full of A Desperate Cry

The Dawn

As the wide cover of unevaluating darkness
studded with sparkling spots
which glitter and glimmer in unproportionate delays
begin to fold itself in gentle pace
the sweetly singing chirping birds
with brisk clapping feathers
wander and ponder to all parts in search of survival
to last another gruelling day of tedious struggles
the grimly faced white shadowy angel

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