Vijay Sai

Rookie - 34 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Comments about Vijay Sai

  • Rookie Rabia Nadeem (4/30/2013 5:23:00 AM)

    I liked the poems....they are simple but give important messages.

    2 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 2 Points Atlay ............ (12/20/2012 10:44:00 AM)

    well written short but strong

  • Rookie William Calvert (8/25/2012 7:13:00 AM)

    Really enjoyed it Vijay.

  • Rookie Sam Lina (8/11/2012 6:53:00 PM)

    your writing about DEVINE SHOWERS had showered emotions on me.
    good job..!

  • Rookie - 10 Points Wendell Brown (7/14/2012 5:57:00 AM)

    I like the way the joy of the children at school, was incorporated with some of its ills and failures with the ghastly event that will effect the lives of all at the school! Very nice write my brother!

  • Rookie Vincent Kuo (5/28/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    You are a wonderful poet, with a good command of English literary craft. Great attention to detailed through your descriptive or explicit writing style. However, I would also love to get a glimpse of the implicit side of your vivid imagery.

  • Rookie Keith Durante (4/17/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    I enjoyed your poem a lot. Very well said in short prose. I'm impressed by your talent

  • Rookie Mongo Taribubu (4/15/2012 11:26:00 AM)

    Alliteration is a great poetic tool when it is used sparingly, but can be viewed as burdensome when forced.
    I like this poem, but found it to be somewhat forced, however, Vijay is a fresh voice. I like most of what he writes.
    And I will continue to read all that he writes.

  • Rookie - 10 Points Mariposa Jonathan (3/21/2012 3:02:00 PM)

    I REALLY LIKE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING ITS INSPIRING

  • Rookie Biju Kp (6/23/2010 3:38:00 AM)

    Your Poem 'A desperate Cry' is so nice.. A real vision towards life which normally ignoring the people...

The Dawn

As the wide cover of unevaluating darkness
studded with sparkling spots
which glitter and glimmer in unproportionate delays
begin to fold itself in gentle pace
the sweetly singing chirping birds
with brisk clapping feathers
wander and ponder to all parts in search of survival
to last another gruelling day of tedious struggles
the grimly faced white shadowy angel

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