Vijay Sai

Rookie - 320 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Comments about Vijay Sai

  • Rabia Nadeem (4/30/2013 5:23:00 AM)

    I liked the poems....they are simple but give important messages.

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  • Atlay ............ (12/20/2012 10:44:00 AM)

    well written short but strong

  • William Calvert (8/25/2012 7:13:00 AM)

    Really enjoyed it Vijay.

  • Sam Lina (8/11/2012 6:53:00 PM)

    your writing about DEVINE SHOWERS had showered emotions on me.
    good job..!

  • Wendell Brown Wendell Brown (7/14/2012 5:57:00 AM)

    I like the way the joy of the children at school, was incorporated with some of its ills and failures with the ghastly event that will effect the lives of all at the school! Very nice write my brother!

  • Vincent Kuo Vincent Kuo (5/28/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    You are a wonderful poet, with a good command of English literary craft. Great attention to detailed through your descriptive or explicit writing style. However, I would also love to get a glimpse of the implicit side of your vivid imagery.

  • Keith Durante (4/17/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    I enjoyed your poem a lot. Very well said in short prose. I'm impressed by your talent

  • Mongo Taribubu (4/15/2012 11:26:00 AM)

    Alliteration is a great poetic tool when it is used sparingly, but can be viewed as burdensome when forced.
    I like this poem, but found it to be somewhat forced, however, Vijay is a fresh voice. I like most of what he writes.
    And I will continue to read all that he writes.

  • Mariposa Jonathan (3/21/2012 3:02:00 PM)

    I REALLY LIKE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING ITS INSPIRING

  • Biju Kp (6/23/2010 3:38:00 AM)

    Your Poem 'A desperate Cry' is so nice.. A real vision towards life which normally ignoring the people...

Best Poem of Vijay Sai

A Desperate Cry

God's creation
Blessed to be born in this world
We all may feel that's the truth
Until I read this-
An abandoned baby
Malnourished, hardly an year old
Famine struck
Skin and bone
No food to feed
No water to have
Stranded alone in barren land
Helpless eyes staring straight
Standing legs more like a bamboo stick
Cerebral neurons popping out
Veins struggling to carry weak blood
Oh God! Nothing more I can add…
My heart is not strong enough
To read the rest-
A vampire vulture
Sitting beside and
Looking eager to end its hunger!
I pray!...

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Trap

Save me, Save me,
I'm dying-
I'm close to breathing my last,
Save me! Oh!
I'm struggling to free myself-
The enemy is after me
How could I shout!
Save me!
I'm cornered,

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