Viraj Bhanshaly

Rookie (England)

Comments about Viraj Bhanshaly

  • June Smith (12/2/2006 3:34:00 PM)

    eccelent poetical style
    a bit british perhaps

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The fiery sky pierced within
Brings down heavy rain,
Its monstrous drops pounding the earth
The birds going insane,

Darkening, darkening, darkening still
Thunder swept the land,
Trees swaying to and fro,
Death hitting the sand,

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