Viraj Bhanshaly

Rookie (England)

Comments about Viraj Bhanshaly

  • Rookie June Smith (12/2/2006 3:34:00 PM)

    eccelent poetical style
    a bit british perhaps

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Those that vouch with careful steps
Will always gain a strife,
Those that help with great beliefs
Won't feel a vicious life.

For freedom wasn't easy,
For those that lived at all,
It gained only mercy
And led to only fall.

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