The Dusk: Who ordered it to be? And the dawn?
The Light that never faded- ever and anon?
He, the Majestic, gave thorns their prick,
He painted flowers of hues with His crayon;
These valleys, so green, full of life, and the sky,
Over my head a roof, under my feet a lawn;
excellent poems, vivid imagery, good use of similes...keep it up