There is alot of anger in your poetry nevertheless I see elements of Ezra Pound and St. Millay. Calm down and focus on that wonderful surrealistic talent you obviously have-you might find out Sylvia Plath has nothing on you!
learning to love
'Stop it. Just stop everything.' After that I run full fledged out the front door.
The endless field in front of me is the only destination I know. The scarecrow looks at me with smiling eyes as I catch my breath.