wild fire

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  • Rookie - 137 Points Pasquale Dimeola (11/3/2006 3:59:00 PM)

    There is alot of anger in your poetry nevertheless I see elements of Ezra Pound and St. Millay. Calm down and focus on that wonderful surrealistic talent you obviously have-you might find out Sylvia Plath has nothing on you!

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Lifeless Living

Your heart beats wildly,
as we both lie awake.
Hugging me to you,
afraid to let go.

Keep your grasp, love
I might slip away
silence is your response
and i accept it fully

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