yoonoos peerbocus

Rookie - 166 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

Comments about yoonoos peerbocus

  • Gold Star - 5,427 Points Nyota Yasulwe (7/21/2015 2:59:00 AM)

    Very good poems you have. I wish I could have your insight into my poems.

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  • Gold Star - 8,689 Points Herbert Guitang (5/3/2015 5:01:00 AM)

    Beautiful pieces of poems

  • Rookie - 0 Points Marek Urban (11/16/2012 10:00:00 AM)

    I tried to add the following comment on your latest poem, however my verification code was questioned, so here it is:
    The premonition of platonic duality and sensing the idealistic world, however so fragile due to the natural boundaries of eternal law. Sensing of unusual dimension and tricky exchanging roles between man and eternity.
    Is that what you mean?

  • Rookie - 10 Points Frank Adie (10/23/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    Your talent was really brought to bare in this poem.
    A great work of art I must say.

    However, I found line 2 stanza 1 a bit confusing (There's no outside) ........

  • Bronze Star - 2,362 Points Rajkamal P.j (10/23/2012 12:37:00 AM)

    I am not finding the poem 'a dying soldiers confession'...I always read your poems..they are deeply philosophical. speaks truth..keep writing such thought provoking pieces to keep inspired we beginners..

  • Rookie Bello Sagir imam (10/21/2012 2:30:00 PM)

    I looked for a dying soldiers... But I could't find it. I read some of your poems, they are very artistic. Thank you for sharing them with us.

  • Rookie - 11 Points Trish Johnston (10/3/2012 2:59:00 PM)

    If only more could view all with equity. Nice work.

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aaron Kwasi Nyarko Osafo (10/3/2012 2:36:00 AM)

    Your poems are very great....i enjoy reading them so keep it up! ! !

  • Rookie Dennis Fenton (9/24/2012 2:31:00 PM)

    Nice work on your poem A confession of a pearl dealer. It made me search for your meaning and brought me closer to it.

  • Rookie - 15 Points Jeff Nesvig (9/17/2012 7:50:00 AM)

    my good friens I have just finished reading A brief anatomy of love...such beautiful poetry and words that are so true, your work is inspiring!


Best Poem of yoonoos peerbocus

A Hint At What Is Beautiful?

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who go out of their way
To nurse shrapnel scalded victims

Amidst napalm drugged air,
Carrying their humanity, quietly
And humbly, in our
Blood stained, greed diseased,
Hate eaten world.

Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
Consciousness expands endlessly.

Read the full of A Hint At What Is Beautiful?

A Kiss

Of all raw passions, kiss alone
Seals lips but opens hearts
So short its distance
Be it of blood or two souls,

To reverence awareness,
Sweetest though unspoken
Understood by any tongue
Whose affection natural as sigh

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