yoonoos peerbocus

Rookie - 397 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

Comments about yoonoos peerbocus

  • Duncan Stephen (11/28/2015 10:04:00 AM)

    I have read a selection of your poems and I can assure you that I will read them all eventually. I do llike
    the flow of your poems.

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  • Nyota Yasulwe Nyota Yasulwe (7/21/2015 2:59:00 AM)

    Very good poems you have. I wish I could have your insight into my poems.

  • Herbert Guitang Herbert Guitang (5/3/2015 5:01:00 AM)

    Beautiful pieces of poems

  • Marek Urban Marek Urban (11/16/2012 10:00:00 AM)

    I tried to add the following comment on your latest poem, however my verification code was questioned, so here it is:
    The premonition of platonic duality and sensing the idealistic world, however so fragile due to the natural boundaries of eternal law. Sensing of unusual dimension and tricky exchanging roles between man and eternity.
    Is that what you mean?

  • Frank Adie Frank Adie (10/23/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    Your talent was really brought to bare in this poem.
    A great work of art I must say.

    However, I found line 2 stanza 1 a bit confusing (There's no outside) ........

  • Rajkamal P.j (10/23/2012 12:37:00 AM)

    I am not finding the poem 'a dying soldiers confession'...I always read your poems..they are deeply philosophical. speaks truth..keep writing such thought provoking pieces to keep inspired we beginners..

  • Bello Sagir imam (10/21/2012 2:30:00 PM)

    I looked for a dying soldiers... But I could't find it. I read some of your poems, they are very artistic. Thank you for sharing them with us.

  • Trish Johnston Trish Johnston (10/3/2012 2:59:00 PM)

    If only more could view all with equity. Nice work.

  • Aaron Kwasi Nyarko Osafo Aaron Kwasi Nyarko Osafo (10/3/2012 2:36:00 AM)

    Your poems are very great....i enjoy reading them so keep it up! ! !

  • Dennis Fenton (9/24/2012 2:31:00 PM)

    Nice work on your poem A confession of a pearl dealer. It made me search for your meaning and brought me closer to it.

Best Poem of yoonoos peerbocus

A Hint At What Is Beautiful?

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who go out of their way
To nurse shrapnel scalded victims

Amidst napalm drugged air,
Carrying their humanity, quietly
And humbly, in our
Blood stained, greed diseased,
Hate eaten world.

Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
Consciousness expands endlessly.

Read the full of A Hint At What Is Beautiful?


Not to trust passion of friendship
As the holiest communion
Is to distrust freewill-
Fate makes our parents,
Choice, makes our friend.
Tirelessly benevolent,
Saves self from loneliness
And pal from evil bent

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