I tried to add the following comment on your latest poem, however my verification code was questioned, so here it is:
The premonition of platonic duality and sensing the idealistic world, however so fragile due to the natural boundaries of eternal law. Sensing of unusual dimension and tricky exchanging roles between man and eternity.
Is that what you mean?
I am not finding the poem 'a dying soldiers confession'...I always read your poems..they are deeply philosophical. speaks truth..keep writing such thought provoking pieces to keep inspired we beginners..
Not to trust passion of friendship As the holiest communion Is to distrust freewill- Fate makes our parents, Choice, makes our friend. Tirelessly benevolent, Saves self from loneliness And pal from evil bent