Yuji Baba


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  • Rookie Yuji Baba (12/30/2004 5:39:00 PM)

    Well monsieur/madam Poetry Hound whoever you may be. I said I wrote to entertain myself…not that I was only writing for myself. That’s a slightly clichéd thing to say is it not?
    I don’t mind who reads my stuff they can feel free. I just don’t really care whether they like my work or not as I don’t attempt to write thing in any kind of structural form.
    Thank you and good night.

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  • Rookie - 150 Points Poetry Hound (12/30/2004 6:13:00 AM)

    You're only writing for yourself? Yeah, right. Then why are you posting it and showing it to everyone?

Unfinished

Drowning in the melancholy of youth
I look up and I feel I can touch the sky
Watching the sun melt into the bleeding horizon
There is no one left but me and the moon

The park has become a circus of shadows
You said to meet here but I can’t stop walking
Taking one misplaced step after another
I’d be safer walking over broken glass

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