Ace Of Black Hearts

Silver Star - 3,265 Points (04/17/1984 / Homa Lousiana)

Comments about Ace Of Black Hearts

  • V P Mahur V P Mahur (3/26/2014 4:53:00 AM)

    Dear Sir,
    A very sweet and nice poem this one. i liked it.

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  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/14/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Black hearts reformed into one sculpture of one dark chamber, the Ace...As black poetry be your wall, framing the soul, mind, thought and yourself inside it...but dont be fooled by the dark heart color as inside it is a bulb covered by black glass but when it sparking light the bright still reach too...sometimes it sounds dark by poetry but the true of what you mean carry the contrast...that is the pureness of Ace, Ace of Black Hearts...a talented poet in other words if i can say here_Soul

Nothing Else Better

So scared, so unsure.
So reserved, so undeserved.
Pinch me, telling me I'm not dreaming?
Tell me I'm not this little child with great plans of most fortunate future.
A great big house, children, and a woman I extremely love.
Gifts raining down from above.
With an innocent push, then a not so innocent shove.
They say love is blind, what if I told you it's worth it.
Give me the cane.

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