Adam McKim

Rookie - 222 Points (11/12/1984)

Adam McKim Poems

81. Memories 3/21/2012
82. A Poet To Be 3/15/2012
83. A Broken Heart's Song 3/26/2012

Comments about Adam McKim

  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (9/3/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    In my assessment as one who teaches English language and literature and as one who occasionally asks my students to write poems and stories at times your poetry has a charm of its own with vibrant and well focussed thought patterns. Mr Adam McKim has a Frostian philosophy in its hidden shades and he is going to make it greater still I believe. All the best Mr Adam

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  • Lisa Struthers (8/3/2012 8:16:00 PM)

    I just have to say, I had to read all your poems once I read the first. They say things I've felt that I could never give the right words too. So thank you...it's truly nice to know that it's not just me who feels as you do! ! ! Keep writing, you really have a way with words that convey so many different emotions.
    ~Lisa

  • Christine Blaydes Christine Blaydes (3/28/2012 12:41:00 AM)

    I love your poems, they are so cleaver and well said. Life changing. keep it up! =D

  • Alexianna Brandhagen (3/24/2012 4:56:00 PM)

    your poems are well-written, well-phrased, and well done overall. i seldom find poems with so much raw emotion, and i look forward to any more you submit. brava

Best Poem of Adam McKim

A Broken Heart's Song

A broken heart's song,
Starts out slow.
A confusion of melodies,
With easy flow.

Keys of a piano,
Play a sad tune.
But nothing compared,
To what comes soon.

Strings of violins,
Add to the gloom.
The broken heart's song,
Fills the room.

Confusion fades,
The hurt settles in.
As a Theremin's cry,
Creeps under the skin.

The pain is too much,
For the broken heart.
As the days go by,
The anger starts.

The beating of drums,
From hitting the wall.
The crash of cymbals,
As you ...

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Forever With You

Our journey was started years ago,
Alone we walked in time so slow.
Filled with heartbreak our memories past,
The future is now with us at last.

Together we walk, no longer alone,
Forming paved roads from stepping stones.
Overcoming sadness from time before,
Together we walk through a new door.

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