I like the dark-styled scenery your poetry brings to readers! I think the most important element with poetry is its message. I definitely received the message you were conveying in your poetry! Keep reading other styles of poetry and I'm sure you'll improve your poetry so much more, Angel.
I miss you, I don't know what to do without you here, How to get you back to me without leaving me to. Its like the world would end, Without me hearing you. I'm sorry for my mistake, My heart is still for you to take.