Alexandria Angel

Rookie - 225 Points (Dulce, New Mexico)

Comments about Alexandria Angel

  • Wisdom Michael (11/2/2012 2:17:00 PM)

    good work alex. its interesting

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  • Steven W. Chung Steven W. Chung (11/1/2012 6:19:00 PM)

    I like the dark-styled scenery your poetry brings to readers! I think the most important element with poetry is its message. I definitely received the message you were conveying in your poetry! Keep reading other styles of poetry and I'm sure you'll improve your poetry so much more, Angel.

    -Steve

  • Alexandria Angel Alexandria Angel (10/25/2012 9:51:00 AM)

    Lol I'm tryin my best at writin these poetry so please don't get mad if I write a bad poem

Thank You Troops

Sacrificing everything they had,
Some comes back sad.
They lost friends and family to war,
A lot of loved ones that made their hearts tore.
Friends carried the remains of those who were buried.
They fight with everything they got,
Some never forgotten.
Guns that were held high,
Makes you want to cry for those who died.

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