Amir Foroughi

Rookie - 0 Points [Torpidipus] (Tabriz)

Comments about Amir Foroughi

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (10/9/2011 12:11:00 AM)

    Dark melancholic melody is your expertise, the tunes you tweet, flame all heart with frozen feeling, Sweet and deep. I can see all poems of yours have that...Sorrow of past and morrow your original poems hold..I wonder if you can sing a happier song like changing from night to morning, fighting of dark mourning..A talent that you hold should inspire more good way in you to break out all brokenness and be a shine for others to follow.. Amir my friend, for amazing poetry hand you have i wish you all the best and writing with no end..The journey is in your palm, open for new way of poetry and life for brighter. A gift should be appreciated.. Dark melancholic singer, it's time to sing new song by your hand..Writing more Amir! Wish you all the best_Unwritten Soul

    4 person liked.
    3 person did not like.
  • p.a. noushad p.a. noushad (9/11/2009 3:39:00 AM)

    interesting presentation of the subject.

My Withered...

To Lost the living love,
Must
Be dead to know.
Dust
upon the grave,
Rust
To the heart not soul.

Can
Save me from satan,
Ran
From down to heaven.
Man
Adores you even ants,
Hand
To be touched no to be told.

[Report Error]