Amitava Chakraborty

Rookie (9th August,1970 / Antpur, Hooghly(W.B) -India)

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 6:42:00 AM)

    - On Sat,14/2/09, Eli wrote:
    From: Eli
    Subject: Re: [creative_writing] AUTOBIOGRAPHY OF A DEPENDANT BROOK
    To: creative_writing@yahoogroups.com
    Date: Saturday,14 February,2009,5: 52 PM

    Greetings.
    I understand what youre trying to do here,
    re: assonance rhyming e.g. bee/sea, plate/straight
    and alternate syllabic verse, i.e. the way
    the stanza has a rhythm.
    If this is an experiment, well done. Be brave.
    OL.

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 6:37:00 AM)

    - On Tue,6/1/09, erikestabrookforreals wrote:
    From: erikestabrookforreals
    Subject: Re: IN SEARCH OF ENLIGHTENMENT
    Date: Tuesday,6 January,2009,8: 49 PM
    this was intense with very strong words, and when I read it its a
    complex poem, following so many paths for one poem, I enjoyed it
    thank you

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 3:35:00 AM)

    - On Sun,4/1/09, Dudley Hiles wrote:

    From: Dudley Hiles
    Subject: Re: [creative_writing] GO BACK TO NATURE
    To: creative_writing@yahoogroups.com
    Date: Sunday,4 January,2009,1: 46 AM


    I read everything of yours, but have not posted to them yet. Your a very good-no a superb poet in my opinion.
    Keep writing...

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 3:33:00 AM)

    - On Sat,3/1/09, Dudley Hiles wrote:

    From: Dudley Hiles
    Subject: Re: [creative_writing] GO BACK TO NATURE
    To: creative_writing@yahoogroups.com
    Date: Saturday,3 January,2009,7: 34 AM


    I love your writing, and never miss a post.
    You remind me of John Updike, ever read him? ?

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 3:29:00 AM)

    - On Sun,28/12/08, Dudley Hiles wrote:

    From: Dudley Hiles
    Subject: Re: [creative_writing] ALIEN I TODAY
    To: creative_writing@yahoogroups.com
    Date: Sunday,28 December,2008,8: 52 AM


    Stunning work. I would of been impressed with half the stanzas. I'm glad you write, its a gift I'm enjoying.

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 3:27:00 AM)

    - On Fri,26/12/08, Dudley Hiles wrote:

    From: Dudley Hiles
    Subject: Re: [creative_writing] DREAM AWAKEN
    To: creative_writing@yahoogroups.com
    Date: Friday,26 December,2008,1: 01 AM


    Please post more of your writing, I feel cheated if I missed any.

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 3:25:00 AM)

    - On Mon,22/12/08, rastafarimami wrote:

    From: rastafarimami
    Subject: (TPS) Darkness
    To: ThePoetrySpot@yahoogroups.com
    Date: Monday,22 December,2008,4: 11 PM

    i respect your thinking.very strong writing.try to post more

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 3:24:00 AM)

    - On Sun,7/12/08, Pauline Hamilton wrote:

    From: Pauline Hamilton
    Subject: [creative_writing] Darkness
    To: creative_writing@yahoogroups.com
    Date: Sunday,20 December,2008,4: 45 PM


    Very good writing, i like it.keep posting

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 3:24:00 AM)

    - On Tue,16/12/08, Kay Sparks wrote:

    From: Kay Sparks
    Subject: Re: Darkness
    To: 'sarkar_papia'
    Date: Tuesday,16 December,2008,11: 01 PM

    Interesting write, Sparkule

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  • Amitava Chakraborty (5/18/2009 2:52:00 AM)

    - On Thu,27/11/08, mail4bams wrote:

    From: mail4bams
    Subject: [creative_writing] Re: Expectation
    To: creative_writing@yahoogroups.com
    Date: Thursday,27 November,2008,2: 10 PM


    `Expectation is sweeter than execution'-known to all,
    So love we get in counting for the expected moment forgetting
    consequence.

    I guess i find truth in these words.
    Good write.

    ...My aimless sketching plays on the canvas of mesmeric emotion...

    Been there, done that... no t-shirt though: -)
    Again, good write.

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Best Poem of Amitava Chakraborty

Go Back To Nature

An indomitable soul in an infinite venture
Infuses intoxication in vein for untouched newness.
When evergreen nature beckons with abundant beauty & mystery
How strong the attraction becomes to leave from all mundane stress!

Counting waves aimlessly lying on deserted beach
Or an attempt of formatting dream in building sand castles.
Glittering laugh of white foam on splitting surges
As beloved moonlight embraces sea with rhythmic rustle.

When the call of luminous snow clad mountain peak
Makes me spellbound with healing touch my devastated body & mind
Who ...

Read the full of Go Back To Nature

Twin Destiny

Gently pushed she the glossy door with soft fingers
As the indifferent pilot stares at her usual departures
Wore she the arrogant dear skirt
Dares too putting on a vulgar para-shirt
Unable to conceal her rare body wealth
Who saves when she herself loses her moral health?
Embraced in boyfriend's arm, her destination is disco floor
Where suffocating pleasure beckons with spendthrift of
money unto crore.