Ancita Michael

Rookie - 9 Points (29/4/1991)

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  • Dr Library @ Debadarshi Dr Library @ Debadarshi (11/11/2012 7:13:00 AM)

    great imagery in the poem SO FAR..... I could imagine the beaches in mumbai, although i have never been there.......Really enjoyed! ! ! reflects the feelings, sedate within a heart, beautifully, in a mellifluous voice as this is more often i can call a beautiful song sang in pen& paper.....

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Lost You Forever

Standing amongst the fields so lush & green,
enjoying the sunshine with a smile on my lips.
pefrectly happy, the most I had ever been,
I saw a white deer on the bank taking sips.

Quenching its thirst, it then leapt towards me,
suddenly standing still, uncertain and confused
scared and lost under the elm tree,
looking for refuge, immense eyes gleamed.

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