aryaindia india

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aryaindia india Poems

41. Sun-Down 10/25/2009
42. Joy 10/25/2009
43. Crime In The Temple 10/25/2009
44. The Hauunted Piece Of Lace 10/25/2009
45. Forget 10/25/2009
46. Angst Never 10/25/2009
47. Sanctity 10/25/2009
48. Lost You 10/31/2009
49. Without You 10/31/2009
50. Sorrow 10/31/2009
51. Silence 10/31/2009
52. Disharmony 10/31/2009
53. When Money Means Nothing 10/31/2009
54. In Disguise 11/21/2009
55. Inspiration 10/18/2009
56. She Left Before I Could 10/20/2009
57. Living 10/20/2009
58. Questionable Answers 12/4/2009
59. ^ In The Path 12/11/2009
60. Deep Injury 3/9/2010
61. Wheel Of Time 3/9/2010
62. Rain 3/9/2010
63. Understanding 3/9/2010
64. Softened Glory 3/9/2010
65. Masked Philosophy 3/9/2010
66. Visual Spree 3/9/2010
67. On The Brink 3/9/2010
68. Ardent 3/9/2010
69. Blossoming 3/9/2010
70. Then And Now 3/9/2010
71. My Part 3/9/2010
72. Merge 3/9/2010
73. Caressed 3/9/2010
74. Stay With Me 3/9/2010
75. Why 3/9/2010
76. Far Yet Near 3/9/2010
77. Bitter Sweet 3/9/2010
78. Mixed Feelings 3/9/2010
79. Godmother 3/9/2010
80. Freedom 3/9/2010

Comments about aryaindia india

  • Subroto Chatterjee (4/16/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    Madam,
    Your comment on my poem ('Twas Not A Rose) was 'The doubt in the first verse gradually lifts and there is conviction in the last four lines that is very finely expressed. There is alternate rhyming in the first verse, then couplet rhyming in the second, the third verse has classic verse rhyming and the last verse passes off well though the rhyming scheme is odd. Very cleverly done! There is a hard thought that is softened by the sweetness of the words chosen and there is softness too that is hardened by the sharpness of the pen that is clever too. Good luck and god bless, regards, aryaindia.'

    I'm still recovering from this delicious onslaught! ! !
    Your inputs are very much appreciated. Onward ho!
    Cheers & God bless.
    Subroto

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Best Poem of aryaindia india

Aged Beauty

To beauty that is ageless


Surrounded by distant tapering shadows
He, like an old frozen starved crag
Looking gone to earthly viscious eyes
Sees beauty in her artless staggering form
As she touches his forehead lovingly

Only her tapestry weaving colorful shades
Of youth that stayed distant as age advanced
Her charm still beautiful in his radiant eyes
Least of charmed looks himself he sees her
As wine on a warm sultry enthusiastic day

Read the full of Aged Beauty

Kaleidoscope

Spilled are the flashy colors unlimited
Gleaming in their light of shining frenzy
Their hues ranging from dark to light pearl
As they sweep deliriously in the mind
As the memory of your smile twinkles within

Quivering in their metallic lustre
They catch the ray of the midday sun
Frivolously streaming in sheer delight

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