Ashton John Fischer Jr.

(New Orleans, Louisiana)

Comments about Ashton John Fischer Jr.

  • Willa T Olivier (3/19/2005 5:03:00 AM)

    Hello Ashton John Fischer Jr. I liked your poem, 'Fourteen Lines of Life.' I could
    see that you were playing around with the two meanings of the word, right, and thereby leading to some playing with the words left and wrong. You suggest mystery, and I couldn't tell whether you might have been referring to a one-time-only date, or a short affair, or some other relationship, not a romantic one. Perhaps you are teasing your readers. In any case, I enjoyed your poem. Willa TO.

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There is beginning of my end again.
I follow Cynicia, my right eye.
Together we go somewhere, stumble lame
For fourteen times and do never know, why?

Nor even, why not? There's all the answers.
It is hard to return and I am soft.
My ears ring resoundingly. The rest were
Callow human creatures, these we lofted.

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