Ashton John Fischer Jr.

(New Orleans, Louisiana)

Comments about Ashton John Fischer Jr.

  • Willa T Olivier (3/19/2005 5:03:00 AM)

    Hello Ashton John Fischer Jr. I liked your poem, 'Fourteen Lines of Life.' I could
    see that you were playing around with the two meanings of the word, right, and thereby leading to some playing with the words left and wrong. You suggest mystery, and I couldn't tell whether you might have been referring to a one-time-only date, or a short affair, or some other relationship, not a romantic one. Perhaps you are teasing your readers. In any case, I enjoyed your poem. Willa TO.

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She has taught nothing but never denied
And bemoans that I am one-eyed, I think.
Altruistically, she hasn't lied,
Nor told truth, and like a stone does sink.

My sky is angry again, and why not?
Beneath it are creatures that crawl and creep
And don't have anything in reason but
A great deal of nothing, a dreamless sleep.

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