asma bahrainwala

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  • Andrew mark Wilkinson (2/18/2007 4:52:00 AM)

    Asma your work is so good, Fantastic poet i agree...

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  • Reuben Matthew (11/20/2006 4:32:00 AM)

    Dear Asma,

    You are a fantastic poet. You have a natural flair for words and it reflects in your poetry. Your poems dont read like they are laboriously constructed. Your ideas dont appear contrived. Your thoughts, and thereby your poems, flow smoothly.

    The simplicity and (yet) the density are the most striking features about your poetry. One can either read and just enjoy your poems or one can brood over it and derive something out of it.

    Keep up the good work, Asma.

    Best Wishes,

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  • Kunal Kunal (11/8/2006 12:54:00 AM)

    You are a brilliant poet. Please keep it up. Thanks


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Let us be this close tonight.
Let us blur out the boundaries;
Let us dissolve the barriers;
Let you and me be us tonight.

So close that I can feel your breath;
So close that our heartbeats blend;
So close that only the touch remains;
So close that you and me become us tonight.

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