B.A. Phillips

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  • Darrell Rohling (12/16/2004 1:46:00 AM)

    not bad. they evoked many feelings in me, in a scattered sort of way...i'll keep reading for sure, if you keep submitting! thanks.

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  • .... .... (10/30/2004 2:38:00 PM)

    I like your poems...they are honest and written from raw emotion. Cool.
    Keep 'em coming. I

A Rhyme

Breaking down in my chair
What's left except to stare
At a life that once look so filled
Now looks unwilled
Foreign thoughts taking me by the hand
All the way to the desert land
Out of water and out of hope
Dragging feet; head down; beginning to mope
I've had my fill of this life

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