you are by far the most original poet i've read on this website. you write on some fresh and atypical subjects. nice to see not everybody is trapped in the box.
You have written a lot, is there a poem which is a bit longer..I like the feeling of swimming deep into long ones..
Maybe you can have a chanceSince I really loved you twiceIf you would show your sincereI would prove my loyaltyFor the love, that will be everlasting