Beach Girl

Veteran Poet - 1,389 Points [Beach Girl]

Comments about Beach Girl

  • Chukwuma Ndububa Chukwuma Ndububa (10/24/2017 7:46:00 PM)

    Each of your poems gives itself to the senses but something beyond itself to the mind.
    More grace, 'beautiful' poetess.

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  • Aries Profanisaurus Aries Profanisaurus (2/26/2014 6:25:00 PM)

    Woah! ! I must say that i really enjoyed that one. Caused more than a small smile of my face and the lady sitting next to me

  • Aries Profanisaurus Aries Profanisaurus (2/26/2014 6:21:00 PM)

    Short but sweet and possibly true in a way. This is the first of yours that i have read. If the others are as good as this, i for one will enjoy reading them

  • Nika Mcguin Nika Mcguin (2/24/2014 4:02:00 PM)

    The mermaid poetess herself, there's nobody who writes better about, or loves more, the beach. Still, she is more than seashore poems, she has a talent not easily matched for spinning poetic verse into silk!


  • Goldheart Bird (9/25/2013 4:05:00 PM)

    Ms.Beach Girl,
    You are one of the best friends i have in PH. I always send to tons of messages, (I guess sometime i'm annoying) But you always reply with a warm message back! And I love all your poems!
    P.S Please check weekly on my poems! I normal would have 2 new poems every week!

I Fell Into The Sky

As I awoke this morning, I fell into the sky

The ocean left right after me and gracefully rolled by

The elephants stood on their toes and did a little dance

Pansies grew up ten feet tall and frightened little ants

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