Ben mcelfresh

Rookie (10-3-89 / Germany)

Ben mcelfresh Poems

81. Dead Inside 2/15/2007
82. A Broken Soul 11/22/2006

Comments about Ben mcelfresh

  • Anabel just Anabel Anabel just Anabel (3/8/2007 9:32:00 AM)

    You are GREAT! ! ! ace work you do! !
    you know I love music as well, I love to sing! ! thou my voice is not that of angels but I try so hard...your poetry is deep and great! ! !

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Best Poem of Ben mcelfresh

A Broken Soul

a broken soul sits among us
a broken soul we'll never know who

it could be me, it could be you
the quiet one always sits in the corner

the active one is outside playing
but you never know who has the broken soul

a broken heart
a broken soul

can be the same, yet so far apart
we will never know who owns the broken soul

maybe it's the musician who plays the love song
maybe it's the writer who has every friend

but who owns the broken soul shall never tell
the broken soul travels around never to be seen

never to be heard and ...

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Love is something that you feel

something that isn't still

based on trust and feelings

not on sex or dealings

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