Lovesong

Brilliant outstanding no such word which define this

Holy freak. I am obsessed. I’m just going to pretend you wrote this for me-read it 50 more times.

So awesome lovesong

.........all the ingredients are here for an explosive... and dangerous type of love.....which usually leads to a crime of passion.....with someone having bullets through their head.....

The text of this poem could not be published because of Copyright laws. ? ? ? what does this mean? ? ? is there any point looking for any 20th century poems?

nice one I really like it.....

I love this poem. If you enjoyed it, then you might also like my poems 'When I Wake Up Every Morning' and 'So Many Times'.

tenderly violent and breathtaking - like love and life

That full stop shouldn't be there indeed. But I think it somehow underlines the words about their love, markes them out. Without the first line the whole verse becomes the senseless SM-abracadabra. So it's quite reasonable to make them noticeable in this way. Even if this is a mistake of formatting, it is an apropriate mistake indeed.

I love this poem. However, the formatting of this submitted poem is wrong. There should not be a full stop at the end of the first line.