Bill Simmons

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  • Bill Simmons Bill Simmons (8/31/2005 9:19:00 AM)

    A Hundred Thousand Men: Rating: Excellent
    This is a very creative and inspiring poem. I like meter and control, I can feel the passion in this poem, excellent piece! Rob

    A Hundred Thousand Men: Poetry Hound (
    Regardless of whether we think the war was a mistake or the commander in chief misguided, we do need to show support for our troops, and you've done that well.

    A Hundred Thousand Men: Kelly Allen Vinal
    As oe of those, with dozens who work under me, I am honored by your tribute. I am humbled. Thank you, Mr. Simmons

    From Rob, USA: I like your style of writing. Your poetry appears
    to be pure and inspiring. I love the smooth flow of it. And the spiritual message is very gripping. God bless- Rob

    From Toronto Canada: you must have an interesting life. i like the poem about the tv star. thanks

    A Pale Horse: Ivy Schexnayder
    It is a very beautiful poem. I wonder though, what inspired you? I would love to know.

    Beyond Those Mountains: Kelly Allen Vinal
    Generally well-written. Much promise in this writer

    Bugs Rock N Roll: Joyce Lazarus
    what an absolutely delightful poem! thanks, Joyce

    Bugs Rock N Roll: CJ Heck
    Hello Bill,
    Adorable poem. I especially love the surprise ending!
    Warmest regards,

    Cloudy Day: ..
    Kinda like writing that person's initials in mustard on a sandwich...then the whole name.
    *big mistake! it's nasty ;) *

    Cowboys Day: Samantha Garrett
    Very good I really liked how you introduced that hes a cowboy at the end however it may be a little bit more effective if you placed the first line as the title. It would leave a bit of mystery for the reader and then it ties it all together at the end when you say 'he is a cowboy after all'. I am just suggesting things, I really do think its good though.

    For A Day: CJ Heck
    Hello Bill,
    (Clapping) Excellent poem. You have a nice way of writing for the child in us all.
    Warmest regards,

    Freedom: Jeanfrancois Denis
    Powerful write Bill!
    We should all be thankful for the men who died for freedom.
    There are too many men trying to steal it from peoples out there.


    John Laraquette: Lamont Palmer
    Sweet poem. All through my teens and 20's I was an amateur actor, doing lots of community theatre. I was always starstruck and I remember how excited I became when I bumped into John Travolta in an outdoor cafe in Washington DC one night. This poem captures that experience nicely.

    Me And The Lonely: dissatified exmember (1/30/2005 1: 32: 00 PM)
    Loneliness is a state of mind. We are actually never really alone. So many share the same feelings, that we are in fact part of a huge network of people. Just imagine all those thousands of friends just sitting there filling the airwaves with the same omotion. hehehehe hey I'd be looking for some quiet time.

    Nice Poem Bill.

    Mean Senorita: ..
    This is actually pretty funny...i like it. Kinda ironic cause some people think i'm a mean senorita. =)

    My Wife: Alex L Black
    This is such a lovely poem!

    One Candle: Kelly Allen Vinal
    As it burns, very well done.

    One Dream: ..
    I think everyone can relate to this poem. Very clear image...I can see (you) staring at the ceiling with your arms folded across (your) chest. Been there...done that... =)

    Soldier Coming Home: Kelly Allen Vinal
    As a soldier, I can relate to this fine lyric. Nicely done

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  • Bill Simmons Bill Simmons (7/31/2005 10:00:00 AM)

    Comments about authors work:

    Remember Me: Rating: Excellent
    wow, this is an absolutely touching poem! i have a friend who was killed in this war, and i know he'd have loved this poem. i don't see many poems about the military, and this just touched me in a way i can't explain. thank you, god bless you, and keep writing! !

    Blowing in The Breeze: Rating: Excellent
    Beautiful, and so true! ! ! ! ..Joy

    Remember Me: Rating: Excellent
    Nicely done

    Silver Streams....BillWilliamStar: Rating: Excellent
    Good poem

    Soldier Coming Home: Rating: Excellent
    Wonderful sentiment and emotion shown in your poem... Hope all is going well for you

    A Heart's Lie: Rating: Excellent
    very good

    Mean Senorita..(Humor) ..BillWilliamStar: Rating: Excellent
    Glad you took the leap of faith after all these years. I just shared this poem with my husband. After he stopped laughing he wanted to extend his sympathy! He claims to understand your plight! : D keep 'em comin'!

    The Mermaid: Rating: Excellent
    A BEAUTIFUL Poem! !

    The Tin Heart..........(BillWilliamStar: Rating: Excellent
    I absolutely loved this one! I could feel your pain like a river running thru it. Excellent rhyming verse.

    Lonesome And I..........(BillWilliamStar) : Rating: Excellent
    I really like this Bill. It sounds like a good candidate for a song..ever considered that?

    I Never Will (True Story) : Rating: Excellent

    Before There Was You: Rating: Excellent

    The Husband And Wife (A Song) : Rating: Excellent
    Loved this it used to be the way it was about love

    The Trojan Heart: Rating: Excellent
    Love this piece of writing very well worded indeed! .. Thank you

    Woman's Heart: An excellent write with good imagey. Keep up the good work

    The Leprechaun Tree (A childrens Book) : nice one but too long

    Once upon A Time: Once upon a time, to me, seems like such a long time ago.

    In Your Shadow: good work

    Let Me Know (A Song) : LOL> wow. let me tell you it made me think of my bestfriend who betrayed my trust. its something i would give to her. excellenct job!

    The Pig And The Turkey (A Story, Humor) : Laughed my ###! off. Hope I can say that!

    My Wife: Beautiful and inspiring. Another wonderful write. Keep it up!

    The Mermaid: Loved it I could imagine her in her watery wonderland. Great job

    Once upon A Time: Rating: Excellent
    this brought tears to my eyes keep up the good work i will surely keep reading

    The Devil: The devil ain't such a bad guy if you're like me and don't believe in an actual devil, just devilish people.

    Soft As Rose Petals: Such a sweet poem, I get the image of pink rose petals in my head when I read this.

    For A Day: This is a nice lil poem. Good.

    For A Day: cute!

    Lonesome Heart: nice write

    Have you Wondered: Rating: Excellent

    The Easter Bunny: Rating: Excellent

    I Never Will (True Story) : Rating: Excellent

    Clear Still Night: Rating: Excellent

    I Do Wonder: Rating: Excellent

    Zorro (A Story) : Awwwwww, Great write...Written so well.. Be blessed, Betty

    The Mermaid: cool poem

    Here I am again: You're such a romantic in your writes. Great job

    Lonesome Heart: very meaningful and creative write. Thanks for sharing your talent

    Zorro (A Story) : After reading this story It has come to mind I have been on your site because this story is familiar because I read this before. and you know I will read more you were one of many excellent writers on the site

    Soft As Rose Petals: Wonderful well expressed write. This have so much meaning and perception from each source one being you. very descriptive and enjoyable write.Your introduction was so lively I could feel

    The Ugly Tree: Excellent. Great write. I love this poem. I need to let my granddaughter see it.

    Ice On the Water: very nicely written, thanks for sharing.

    Soldier Coming Home: wow, very nice. I like this poem a lot

    The Easter Bunny: Rating: Excellent
    very good

    The Old Farmer: Bill, That is so beautiful! You have such beautiful words that comes from your heart! Thanks for sharing them with all of us.

    The Pig And The Turkey: (A Story, Humor) : Rating: Excellent
    Bill, Excellent poem! ; -) That is well written and funny! ; -) It reminds me when I was growing up in Maine and our big pig got loose and chased me and my sister up on top of the out house! Boy did he do some damamge in the potato fields, and our pride! ; -) Keep writing, I have just begun to read! ; -) Love, Life, Laughter and Peace

    Deception Of The Heart: Can I relate to this poem! :) We do share a similarity in writing. Great write...

    Hawian Blue Skies: Rating: Excellent
    Aloha from Hawaii! You have captured what its like to be lonely in paradise...

    Notes to the Author:

    From: Northern Ireland, I stumbled across your site tonight and i'm glad
    i did. its the best site i have seen so far,
    the work is so fresh and fun and
    some of it is also deep and sincere.100%

    From: Florence, USA, I Have A Dream
    And I like your writes too Bill keep up the
    great work too.

    From: Australia, Hi There you write so well. Very impressive! The
    important thing is you are doing what you

    From: Honolulu, USA, I've enjoyed your site and look forward to
    reading more... You are very talented! Keep up
    the good work :)

    From: A Student, Dear Mr. Star
    My name is **** ***** I'm 16 years old and I'm a
    student of Laramie Senior High School. For our poetry
    class we were asked to find a poem memorize it and
    give a presentation on the author of your poem.
    That's when i came across your poem entitled 'The
    Alamo' I instantly knew that this was the poem i
    wanted to do. I then had to find some backround on
    the author, and i looked for you but i couldn't find
    enough so i was wandering if before this monday May 2
    if you coud send me an e mail that contains your life
    story for the class.
    Thanks for your time

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  • dissatified exmember (1/30/2005 1:38:00 PM)

    Bill you are very much the song writer. It comes through in your work. Have you made a CD?

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  • dissatified exmember (1/30/2005 1:37:00 PM)

    Bill you are very much the song writer. It come through in your work. Have you made a CD?

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  • . . (11/21/2004 1:32:00 PM)

    You should really be writing children's stories. You are a very creative storyteller. I would never want to be the woman who has to say to you 'Tell me the truth.' LOL ;)

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Best Poem of Bill Simmons

Lonesome Heart

The mighty oak I see outside
It's roots are deep and long
It will live a hundred years
And bend when winds are strong

I sometimes feel I can't go on
Losing you is hurting me
I sometimes wish late at night
I had the strength of that old tree

The days my friends they stand by me
They tend to help me through
But then at night when darkness falls
Again I'm missing you

I try to fight but strength won't come
Soon I fall apart
Then the tears fall like rain
So alone is a lonesome heart

I sometimes wish I had the strength
To pick up...

Read the full of Lonesome Heart

Beneath The Moon

In the light of the night
The stars out tonight set the mood
I can see her as she stands before me
Beneath the moon
As I embrace her and I hold her tight
I can feel her breath upon me
So is the chance we take of romance
For tonight will come love soon