Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 76,652 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Bri Edwards Poems

441. Marital-Reciprocity, American-Style .... [humor? ; Short; Revenge; Marriage; Violence] 11/26/2014
442. Best-Blood: Mine! .... [medical Miracles; Fantasy (If You Must Know): Me; Humor; Short] 10/17/2015
443. Called On The Rug... [limerick (Short, Of Course): Humor; Thanks To P H Member M. Asim Nehal] 10/23/2015
444. Death Of Mankind? ……[extinction Poem For November Showcase; How Shall Mankind End, If It Does? ? ; Musings] 11/20/2015
445. Sinister Minister.... [sinners! ; Group Psychology; Crime & Consequences! ! ; Long; Fantasy] 11/9/2015
446. Mcdonald's And Me....Number 2**.... [overeating; Not Me! ; Short; Humor; Inspired By Melvina Germain] 12/14/2015
447. Bri's "Pet Peeves" ….. [aka "My ‘particular Personal Vexations' "; Yes, Personal; Serious! (Maybe Not Totally): Short] 2/16/2016
448. Valentine Indulgences ….. [selfishness? ; Shopping; Avarice (Oops! That's Means Selfishness): Moderate In Length; Fiction; No Humor; Loneliness? ? ] 2/12/2016
449. Eyesight Failing ….. [temporary? Eye Problem; Personal; Short; Humor? ] 3/1/2016
450. Five Fingers Left.. [part Of A Message To M J Lemon, Ph Friend; Short] 5/25/2016
451. 'A Showcase For P H Poets.......June 2016'... [poems Galore, If Not More! ; Starts Out Short, But Gets Longggerrr As Time Passes, Just Like My Tall Tales] 5/31/2016
452. One-Vowel Poems …. [inspired By Brian Mayo; Half A Dozen Short Poems, Each Using Only One Of The 5 ("Sometimes 6") Vowels In The English Alphabet] 6/7/2016
453. A Showcase For P H Poets: J U L Y 2016 …. [more Showcased Poems Of P H Friends; A Mixed Bag Of Seriousness And Silliness; Very Long, In Short, Medium, And Long Sections/Poems] 6/26/2016
454. "Stop Picking On Me! " …..[man Meets Nature, Close-Up; Humor? ; Very Short] 6/21/2016
455. Section A In October 2016 …a Showcase For P H Poets …. [to Each Her/His Own; Time: Its Limitations; Personal Preference; Giving And Receiving; Usually-Monthly Display] 9/26/2016
456. Section B In November 2016 …a 2-Or-3-Section Showcase For P H Poets....[ Expanding Horizons For P H Members & Visitors! ; Different Poems For Different Tastes; Long ] 11/4/2016
457. My Wife Says My Time Is ‘ Near ‘ ….(Because " You Are Getting God-Like Powers") …..[ She Did Say That! ; Mind-Travel; ‘word-Coincidences'; Long; Personal; True! ; Medium-Long] 11/8/2016
458. Leap I Did! ....[inspired By ' Peeping Tom ' By Valsa George, Who Inspired Akhtar Jawad To Write ' Reply Of Peeping Tom To Valsa George With Due Apology. '; Very Short, Enou 10/5/2016
459. The Look On My Wife's Face … [ Marriage Mistake(S): Over And Over; Inspired By Elena Plotkin's "The Look On Your Face Says It All"; A Bit Of A Fib From Bri (A Bit): Short] 12/11/2016
460. A Hole I Dug … [ Toil; Humanity; Misery; Futility; God; Future Generations; Sort Of Short] 12/6/2016
461. The Prisoner …. [ Short; Medieval Execution Techniques; Progress; Inventions] 2/3/2017
462. Before Tv, Before Books …..[inspired By Roald Dahl's Poem "Television"; Thanks To Rod Mendieta; Human Development; Spare Time; Medium Length; Anthropology] 2/17/2017
463. Eve Sees Ed. Ed Seeds Eve. ….. [not ‘'suitable' For Children Under 6; Sex! ; Early ‘mankind'; One-Syllable Poem; Very Short] 3/23/2017
464. Saint Peter's Response …… [inspired By "………..And If………..", A Poem By Ph Member Ruth Walters; Short; Humour/Humor; Love; Religion; Afterlife; Fantasy] 5/11/2014
465. Are Farm Animals Like Humans? ……. [species Comparisons; Biology; Sort Of Short; Humor/Humour] 7/28/2014
466. Won'T You Be My Poemhunter-Valentine? ? ...... [my Silly Very Short Valentine Wish] 2/12/2014
467. New 'Required' Poem-Submission 'Field': My Opinion(S) And Suggestions ..... [topic 'Field' Requirement; My Thoughts] 3/7/2014
468. Super Bugs ........ [department Of Health Warning! ; Very Short; Humour/Humor] 1/25/2014
469. Meals I‘ve Enjoyed, Prepared By My Wife ……. [what It Says; Personal] 4/10/2014
470. Talk Of Expanding Mind! ........ [fantastic Brainiac Tale; Super Short] 12/7/2013
471. Soldier Recruiting [come On God! ].........[an Informal Recruiting Session, Overheard] 10/13/2013
472. The Rape(S) That Didn' T Go As Planned......[very Long; Lust; Humor; Drama] 11/21/2012
473. Away In A Motel Room..... [friends; Motel; Short; Humor] 12/7/2012
474. Spelliing Isn'T Easy.... [correcting A Young Person's Spelling; Spelling Tricks; My Mistake! ] 7/9/2013
475. Tv Memories: As I Stare At A Black Screen....[1950-1960s U.S. (Kids) Tv Shows; Personal; Long] 2/18/2013
476. Are You Really Better Without Me? ........[wondering About A 'Lost' Love; Short] 12/23/2012
477. 2013..... Happy New Year! ..... [serious; Being Thankful For My Good Fortune] 12/31/2012
478. 123.... Shabu.....[mystery Language Fun; Short] 1/26/2013
479. 'Why Are You Laughing? '.....[ Short; A Question My Mate Asked Me Recently; 1st Poem I Have Typed On This Dang Tablet] 4/16/2017
480. "Sun, Don't You Shine! ! " ………[ Written On A Sunny Day; Very Short; ½ True; Humor? ] 12/16/2017

Comments about Bri Edwards

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (9/15/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    My Vote of Thanks!

    Dear Bri Edwards,

    I feel honored that you gave your precious time for evaluating My Scattered Thoughts series, I really treasure your time and substantial contribution according to which I'll edit my poems, and it is something I cannot reciprocate... or express my gratitude...There are many things we ignore simply or do not focus on punctuation and Grammar, and call it just a language barrier. Today I received your critique on Scattered Thoughts i, (and no.X already discussed) ...and I am enlightened about every point you discussed there. Your presence on the site is of substantial value for all of us...

    thank you so much...

    regards,
    Shahzia

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  • Aswath Raman (8/17/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Bri Edwards: I have alwas wondered how people are gifted with the talent of humor. Now, I have intentionally left the letter 'y' in always and I know if I did not tell that now, he'd correct me! An amazing poet Mr Bri Edwards and his level of crirical apprecition (darn! 'appreciation') with a pinch of humor is always great to look forward. A grammer (or grammar?) and spelling artist, he easily guides the poets for rectifying their mistakes and helps them to improve their work. I wish him all the success!

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/10/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    Dear Bri Edwards, well, ..your style in poetry is like a waterfall of light, unique and nice. the stories and the observations that had been inspired you to write such works _ also the art works_ (i mean poems) are cool. and they get the best score when you mix them with humanity(your previous poem that i read) .your messages those are in your poems are so wealthy. i am always your poem's reader and hope to see more poems from you in the future. thank you pal.
    Your pleasure is my wish
    Ellias.

Best Poem of Bri Edwards

My English Sucks ….. [english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

When I were schooled english wernt my thing.
My scores in English lurning no bells done ring.
Yea I grajaded but ain't english smart ….no lie!
Come end a school year the teach said 'By Bri.'

Was same in bilogy, math, jografy all that stuff.
I done did my best and guess my best were enough.
I did done grate at ball games and in trak run the mile.
I was a THREEletter man and made them girls smile.

I got payed for pumpin gas an turned 18 served my Nation.
For 'Bravry Under Fire' in the NAM I were town sensation.
Back home, all tired, I done gone back to the ...

Read the full of My English Sucks ….. [english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

Purple....[humor; Short]

What can I write about purple, the color?
Over that above question I shall mull …. or
just make some stuff up you might just believe.
Let's see what Bri has up his sleeve.

Purple was the seventh color discovered by man.
It's the most often used color in a Chinese fan.
When someone acts silly, we say they are 'acting purple'.
The only word it rhymes with is the archaic word snurple.

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