Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 76,080 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Bri Edwards Poems

561. Life Is Like A Stupid Joke...... [peculiarities Of Mankind; Religion Etc. (My Doubts): Hell, Here I Come! ; Humor? ? ] 8/8/2013
562. Shampoo In My Eyes...... [cleanliness; Who's At The Door? ; Humor; Short] 7/2/2014
563. Part ' B ' Of August 2017's Showcase....[ Poems #13-#24; I Have Used ' Copying And Pasting' To Take These Twelve Poems Out Of The Very Long Showcase] 8/8/2017
564. Autumn: The Mighty Oak Loses Her "Coat" ….[ Falling Leaves; Fun Inspired By The Poem ‘ Oak Tree ‘ By Elisabeth Anne Wingle] 10/4/2017
565. ‘ Hollow ‘ Halloween: Janice And Mr. Bones ….[ Boozing; Loneliness; Mental Health; Psychiatry; Halloween; Fictional; Long Enough ] 10/26/2017
566. She Used Tight Security ... [chastity; Humor; Limerick; Didn'T Really Happen! ] 3/9/2015
567. ' What Is A Great Guy? ', She Asked Her Mom.... [loneliness; Choosing A Mate; Medium; Bri's Advice Column; Serious, Seriously! ] 10/4/2014
568. Where Did I Put It! …… [humor; Advice When Something Is Lost; Poem Challenge For July; Not Long] 7/16/2014
569. [war] Boy In An Envelope..... [war (Vietnam 'Conflict') : A Parent's Loss; Condolences; Very Long, But Worth The Time] 4/2/2014
570. Wishes For My Future.......[short; Personal] 5/15/2012
571. Homosexuality: If It Were The Norm.... [human Sexuality; What If? ; Perceptions] 6/3/2013
572. Any Man With Money Can Have One ....... [very Short; Not Personal (Really): A Romantic Evening; Humor] 11/27/2013
573. Guy In The Chair ....... [a Response To Eugene Levich's Ph Poem 'The Pelican'; Mythology; Short; A Bit Of Humor Perhaps] 5/13/2014
574. Book Of My Life …. [very Short; Aging; Personal; Ph-Inspired] 8/26/2014
575. Stinky Sox/Socks ....... [very Short; Hold Your Nose; Not Personal! ; Humour] 11/30/2013
576. Consider Yourself Lucky …. [things Could Be Worse! ; History; Personal Problems; Humor (Maybe Not) ] 4/8/2014
577. Salamander...... [nature; A Salamander (Of Course!) : Confronting Nature; Almost Short] 5/27/2013
578. Hard..... [girlhood To Old Age; Life; Family; Racial Discord; Marriage; Very Long] 1/7/2013
579. Four More Short Nature Poems... [mussel; Antelope; Goose; Ermine] 1/12/2013
580. Driving Freedom [honk...Hooonk! ! ].......[independent Driver's Thoughts; Humor/Humour] 10/27/2013
581. A Perfect Poem...... [what Is One? ; Very Short; A Poet's Wisdom? ] 6/7/2013
582. God's Kind Of Poetry ….. [sept.2014 Challenge Poem; God & Man; Serious; Personal; A Little Long] 9/25/2014
583. Religious Beliefs I Have (Not) ..... [religion; Personal; Short; Inspired By Krishnakumar [aka Kris] Chandrasekar Nair] 5/20/2015
584. History Of The Pen ….. [history Of Writing Instrument(S) And Ink; Semi-True; Almost Long] 2/17/2016
585. (book # 16) : Sheila And Clifford: Sheila's New Office & Pregnancy ….[ Chapters 49 And 50 Of A Continuing(?) Saga From Bri's Brain; Surprise 'ending'? ? ] 7/10/2017
586. Bri Is A Yodeling Fool 4/18/2017
587. [humor]..... Not Sharing My Food With Those I Love 3/27/2014
588. Black On White; Oops! .... [wedding; Humor; Kinda Short; Possible Entry To Feb. Actc Contest On Ph] 1/11/2015
589. Spilling Milk..... [oops! ; Refrigerator Accident; Personal] 10/18/2013
590. Brown..... The Color ........... [what I Think Of When I Think 'Brown', One Of My Two Favorite Colors] 11/26/2013
591. A Sailboat's Last Thoughts.......[human/Sailboat Nature; Drama; Weather] 11/16/2012
592. It Really Ain'T So Bad.... In Hell ..... [humor; Life In Hell; Response To Message From Ph Friend Eugene Levich; Short-Medium]] 11/28/2014
593. My Name Is Kong: Wrong! ….. [movie ‘monster’; From The ‘monster’s’ Mouth; A Bit Long; For Brian Johnston’s Ph May ‘contest’] 5/10/2015
594. The N E V E R Stamp: It's 'guaranteed'! ! …… [mail Delivery; Inspired By Kelly Kurt; Humor/Humour; Medium Length] 12/18/2015
595. 'Useless'..... [human Uselessness; Psychology; Useless Advice? ; Humor/Humour? ; Sort Of Short] 7/22/2014
596. It Is Night ..... [using The Vowel 'i'; Very Short] 5/22/2017
597. Pet Funeral Pyre..... [ Inspired By P H Message From Dillip K. Swain; Humour; Pet Lovers May Not Wish To Read This One; Very Short; Fantasy ] 12/26/2017
598. February 2018 Showcase For, And Often " By ", P H Members…......[ Poems Collected From Willing And (Sometimes) Un-Willing Poets; For Your Reading Enjoyment ] 1/21/2018
599. Holes I'Ve Known ....... [holes, Of Course! ; Humor/Humour; Medium Length] 6/17/2014
600. Only Two People In The World? .............. [relationships/Marriage; Tongue-In-Cheek Humor; Personal? ; Quite Short] 4/5/2014

Comments about Bri Edwards

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (9/15/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    My Vote of Thanks!

    Dear Bri Edwards,

    I feel honored that you gave your precious time for evaluating My Scattered Thoughts series, I really treasure your time and substantial contribution according to which I'll edit my poems, and it is something I cannot reciprocate... or express my gratitude...There are many things we ignore simply or do not focus on punctuation and Grammar, and call it just a language barrier. Today I received your critique on Scattered Thoughts i, (and no.X already discussed) ...and I am enlightened about every point you discussed there. Your presence on the site is of substantial value for all of us...

    thank you so much...

    regards,
    Shahzia

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  • Aswath Raman (8/17/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Bri Edwards: I have alwas wondered how people are gifted with the talent of humor. Now, I have intentionally left the letter 'y' in always and I know if I did not tell that now, he'd correct me! An amazing poet Mr Bri Edwards and his level of crirical apprecition (darn! 'appreciation') with a pinch of humor is always great to look forward. A grammer (or grammar?) and spelling artist, he easily guides the poets for rectifying their mistakes and helps them to improve their work. I wish him all the success!

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/10/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    Dear Bri Edwards, well, ..your style in poetry is like a waterfall of light, unique and nice. the stories and the observations that had been inspired you to write such works _ also the art works_ (i mean poems) are cool. and they get the best score when you mix them with humanity(your previous poem that i read) .your messages those are in your poems are so wealthy. i am always your poem's reader and hope to see more poems from you in the future. thank you pal.
    Your pleasure is my wish
    Ellias.

Best Poem of Bri Edwards

My English Sucks ….. [english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

When I were schooled english wernt my thing.
My scores in English lurning no bells done ring.
Yea I grajaded but ain't english smart ….no lie!
Come end a school year the teach said 'By Bri.'

Was same in bilogy, math, jografy all that stuff.
I done did my best and guess my best were enough.
I did done grate at ball games and in trak run the mile.
I was a THREEletter man and made them girls smile.

I got payed for pumpin gas an turned 18 served my Nation.
For 'Bravry Under Fire' in the NAM I were town sensation.
Back home, all tired, I done gone back to the ...

Read the full of My English Sucks ….. [english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

Bri Is A Yodeling Fool

Stu said to me, Mr. Bri, : Let's go yodel-ing.
I, Bri, said: NO! I'll land my ass...IN a sling! .
But Stu was adamant; he thought it 'COOL'.....
.....to yodel. I thought Stu was a damn....FOOL!

But soon we were in the Swiss Alps, quite 'high'.
And a cute 'Swiss Miss' there made me sigh.
I yodeled for her day AND sometimes night.
I lost myself in yodeling; it was a true sad sight.

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