Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 82,960 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Bri Edwards Poems

641. Kill Bri / Do Not Kill Bri …. [end-Of-Life Decisions; Personal; Old Age; Medium Length; Serious! ] 7/14/2015
642. Halloween 2016, October 31st: Only In America? … [ Creatures Of Halloween; D A N G E R S Of Halloween! ; Short] 10/31/2016
643. Mary's Pet....[humor; Human Nature; Pets; Scary? ; Grade School] 11/21/2012
644. A Father's Toast At His Gay Son's Wedding Reception..... [same-Sex Marriage; Humour/Humor; Johnny Cash Song/Sheldon Silverstein Poem; Short] 6/18/2014
645. [humor] Speak To Me, Moon..... [speaking To The Moon; Fantasy; Humor; Very Short] 3/28/2014
646. An Apple A Day....... [apples; Health; Stupid Guy; Humor? ; Pretty Short] 8/17/2013
647. Fore! ..... [golf; Sporting Accidents; Humor; Very Short] 7/16/2014
648. A Showcase For P H Poets: A U G U S T 2016 …. [more Showcased Poems Of P H Friends; A Mixed Bag Of Seriousness And Silliness; Very Long ….. In … Short, Medium, And Long Poems] 7/31/2016
649. " I Squished An Ant"...... [ Growing Up; Parenting; Death; Siblings; Fiction; Medium] 3/1/2015
650. Cassie ....... [my Wife's Concern For My Health; My Young Poemhunter Friend (One Of Them): Not Related, Really; Personal; A Little Humor) 12/19/2013
651. A Showcase For Ph Poets: February 2015: Section 'A'... [sharing Poems; Not A Contest; Monthly On Bri Edwards' Ph Site] 3/7/2015
652. Accidental Hacking ........ [humor; Computer Security; Personal; Not Long Or Short] 5/31/2014
653. Alien's Oyster-Feast........ [fantasy; Humor? ; Alien Invasion? ; Personal] 1/8/2014
654. (knotty) Conundrum; Naughty Condom (Or Vice Versa) ..... [some Mostly-Serious Thoughts On Birth Control, Inspired By A Piece Of Trash] 12/3/2013
655. A Bloody Riot............ [football/Soccer Fan Violence; Humor? ? ; Very Short] 7/15/2013
656. Section A In September 2016 …a Showcase For P H Poets …. [to Each Her/His Own; Time: Its Limitations; Personal Preference; Giving And Receiving; Usually-Monthly Display] 8/25/2016
657. Charged Twice.... [ Funeral With A Twist; Death Expenses; My Response To Tom Allport's Comment On My ' Fun-Eral' Poem; Very Short] 6/9/2017
658. Being A Snail ....... [snails; From The Snail's 'Mouth'; Wisdom; A Touch Of Humour/Humor] 5/6/2014
659. (book # 1) : Sheila And Clifford: 'Hello! ' ……. [new Relationship; Shyness; 'Un-Shyness'; Very Long, But Very Good? ] 11/7/2014
660. Dessert Deluge ..... [ 'Just' Desserts, Not 'Deserts'; Traveling Diet; Personal; Medium Length] 9/22/2014
661. Shy Bri ….[ The ‘other' Me; Fantasy; Shyness To The Extreme? ; Humor; Long; Growing To Adulthood] 10/22/2016
662. Steal This Poem - Poem By Brian Mayo ... [yes, I Did Steal His Poem; Thanks, Brian] 12/18/2015
663. June 2017's Showcase For Poem-Hunter Poets....[ A Mix Of This And That; 20 Or So Poems By 20 Or So Poets All On One (1) Page! ] 5/14/2017
664. A Lonely Cloud.....[nature Observation; Humor] 8/30/2012
665. I Hate People...... [humor? (I Hope So): Some Personal Thoughts] 9/8/2013
666. Last Banana In The Universe... [bananas; Silly; Very Short] 10/12/2014
667. 1aaa..... 'wrong Verification Code'....[how To 'get Around' The 'wrong Verification Code' Message On Poemhunter] 12/18/2012
668. April 2017's Showcase For Poemhunter Poets …[ Something For Everyone! ; A Collection Of Poems By P H Members; Some May Be Shortened By Me To 24 Lines Or Less] 3/27/2017
669. My Repetitious Future....[long; My Life/Personal; Math] 11/10/2012
670. Actc: 2015/01: Contest Titles (2) And Info For January Challenge..... [a Contest; This Is Information And Entries For An Ongoing Poetry Contest On Ph] 1/9/2015
671. Dinosaurs: Are We Next? ... [dinosaurs; Extinction; Mankind's Future; Noah; Kind Of Short] 3/8/2015
672. Hair Between My Toes.............. [very Short; Humor; Eccentric Individual] 2/17/2014
673. '6 Foot 3'......[long; Scary; Gross; Murder] 11/18/2012
674. Oh! Doctor …. ["Time Is Money"; Surgery Choices; Humor? ; Medium Length; Personal ‘fantasy' Inspired By Savita Tyagi] 7/22/2016
675. No-See-‘em .. [camping; Humor; Short; Annoyance (No, Not Me!) ] 3/23/2015
676. ...A Showcase For Ph Poets: February 2015: Section 'A'... [sharing Poems; Not A Contest; Monthly On Bri Edwards' Ph Site] 2/2/2015
677. A Showcase For Ph Poets: March 2015: Section 'A'.... [sharing Poems; Not A Contest; Monthly On Bri Edwards' Ph Site] 2/28/2015
678. 65th-Birthday Gift(S) ..... [my Birthday Hike With My Mate; Birds; Cheap Spousal Gifts; Short] 7/7/2013
679. ' Spider' Is Watching You.... [ A Little Girl's 'pet' Spider; 'cute', Says Valsa G.; Idea From Stephen Katona On Ph] 3/20/2015
680. Get Up, But Don’t Bother Me...... [humor; Short Enough; Marriage; Fiction! ; Modeled On Lora Colon's 'similar' Poem] 3/21/2015

Comments about Bri Edwards

  • Janet Stewart (12/1/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    Bri thank you for your comments.

    1 person liked.
    2 person did not like.
  • Keith Fowler (9/23/2013 2:23:00 AM)

    Bri thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem it was much appreciated
    and fun.

    frendall

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (9/15/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    My Vote of Thanks!

    Dear Bri Edwards,

    I feel honored that you gave your precious time for evaluating My Scattered Thoughts series, I really treasure your time and substantial contribution according to which I'll edit my poems, and it is something I cannot reciprocate... or express my gratitude...There are many things we ignore simply or do not focus on punctuation and Grammar, and call it just a language barrier. Today I received your critique on Scattered Thoughts i, (and no.X already discussed) ...and I am enlightened about every point you discussed there. Your presence on the site is of substantial value for all of us...

    thank you so much...

    regards,
    Shahzia

  • Aswath Raman (8/17/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Bri Edwards: I have alwas wondered how people are gifted with the talent of humor. Now, I have intentionally left the letter 'y' in always and I know if I did not tell that now, he'd correct me! An amazing poet Mr Bri Edwards and his level of crirical apprecition (darn! 'appreciation') with a pinch of humor is always great to look forward. A grammer (or grammar?) and spelling artist, he easily guides the poets for rectifying their mistakes and helps them to improve their work. I wish him all the success!

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/10/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    Dear Bri Edwards, well, ..your style in poetry is like a waterfall of light, unique and nice. the stories and the observations that had been inspired you to write such works _ also the art works_ (i mean poems) are cool. and they get the best score when you mix them with humanity(your previous poem that i read) .your messages those are in your poems are so wealthy. i am always your poem's reader and hope to see more poems from you in the future. thank you pal.
    Your pleasure is my wish
    Ellias.

Best Poem of Bri Edwards

My English Sucks …..[english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

When I were schooled english wernt my thing.
My scores in English lurning no bells done ring.
Yea I grajaded but ain't english smart ….no lie!
Come end a school year the teach said 'By Bri.'

Was same in bilogy, math, jografy all that stuff.
I done did my best and guess my best were enough.
I did done grate at ball games and in trak run the mile.
I was a THREEletter man and made them girls smile.

I got payed for pumpin gas an turned 18 served my Nation.
For 'Bravry Under Fire' in the NAM I were town sensation.
Back home, all tired, I done gone back to the ...

Read the full of My English Sucks …..[english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

Bri Is A Yodeling Fool

Stu said to me, Mr. Bri, : Let's go yodel-ing.
I, Bri, said: NO! I'll land my ass...IN a sling! .
But Stu was adamant; he thought it 'COOL'.....
.....to yodel. I thought Stu was a damn....FOOL!

But soon we were in the Swiss Alps, quite 'high'.
And a cute 'Swiss Miss' there made me sigh.
I yodeled for her day AND sometimes night.
I lost myself in yodeling; it was a true sad sight.

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