Bri Edwards

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Bri Edwards Poems

641. A Bloody Riot............ [football/Soccer Fan Violence; Humor? ? ; Very Short] 7/15/2013
642. Section A In September 2016 …a Showcase For P H Poets …. [to Each Her/His Own; Time: Its Limitations; Personal Preference; Giving And Receiving; Usually-Monthly Display] 8/25/2016
643. Charged Twice.... [ Funeral With A Twist; Death Expenses; My Response To Tom Allport's Comment On My ' Fun-Eral' Poem; Very Short] 6/9/2017
644. Beware Of Scams In Sheep's Clothing...... [liars Sending Ph Messages; Short Enough: Scams] 9/3/2014
645. Being A Snail ....... [snails; From The Snail's 'Mouth'; Wisdom; A Touch Of Humour/Humor] 5/6/2014
646. (book # 1) : Sheila And Clifford: 'Hello! ' ……. [new Relationship; Shyness; 'Un-Shyness'; Very Long, But Very Good? ] 11/7/2014
647. Dessert Deluge ..... [ 'Just' Desserts, Not 'Deserts'; Traveling Diet; Personal; Medium Length] 9/22/2014
648. Shy Bri ….[ The ‘other' Me; Fantasy; Shyness To The Extreme? ; Humor; Long; Growing To Adulthood] 10/22/2016
649. Steal This Poem - Poem By Brian Mayo ... [yes, I Did Steal His Poem; Thanks, Brian] 12/18/2015
650. June 2017's Showcase For Poem-Hunter Poets....[ A Mix Of This And That; 20 Or So Poems By 20 Or So Poets All On One (1) Page! ] 5/14/2017
651. A Lonely Cloud.....[nature Observation; Humor] 8/30/2012
652. A Showcase For Ph Poets: March 2015: Section 'A'.... [sharing Poems; Not A Contest; Monthly On Bri Edwards' Ph Site] 2/28/2015
653. I Hate People...... [humor? (I Hope So): Some Personal Thoughts] 9/8/2013
654. Last Banana In The Universe... [bananas; Silly; Very Short] 10/12/2014
655. 1aaa..... 'wrong Verification Code'....[how To 'get Around' The 'wrong Verification Code' Message On Poemhunter] 12/18/2012
656. April 2017's Showcase For Poemhunter Poets …[ Something For Everyone! ; A Collection Of Poems By P H Members; Some May Be Shortened By Me To 24 Lines Or Less] 3/27/2017
657. Hair Between My Toes.............. [very Short; Humor; Eccentric Individual] 2/17/2014
658. My Repetitious Future....[long; My Life/Personal; Math] 11/10/2012
659. Actc: 2015/01: Contest Titles (2) And Info For January Challenge..... [a Contest; This Is Information And Entries For An Ongoing Poetry Contest On Ph] 1/9/2015
660. Dinosaurs: Are We Next? ... [dinosaurs; Extinction; Mankind's Future; Noah; Kind Of Short] 3/8/2015
661. A Father's Toast At His Gay Son's Wedding Reception..... [same-Sex Marriage; Humour/Humor; Johnny Cash Song/Sheldon Silverstein Poem; Short] 6/18/2014
662. No-See-‘em .. [camping; Humor; Short; Annoyance (No, Not Me!) ] 3/23/2015
663. ...A Showcase For Ph Poets: February 2015: Section 'A'... [sharing Poems; Not A Contest; Monthly On Bri Edwards' Ph Site] 2/2/2015
664. Oh! Doctor …. ["Time Is Money"; Surgery Choices; Humor? ; Medium Length; Personal ‘fantasy' Inspired By Savita Tyagi] 7/22/2016
665. 65th-Birthday Gift(S) ..... [my Birthday Hike With My Mate; Birds; Cheap Spousal Gifts; Short] 7/7/2013
666. ' Spider' Is Watching You.... [ A Little Girl's 'pet' Spider; 'cute', Says Valsa G.; Idea From Stephen Katona On Ph] 3/20/2015
667. Get Up, But Don’t Bother Me...... [humor; Short Enough; Marriage; Fiction! ; Modeled On Lora Colon's 'similar' Poem] 3/21/2015
668. Actc: 2014/12: Contest Titles (2) And Info For December Challenge 12/4/2014
669. 'Mashed Potatoes'......[ Personal; Autobiographical; Short] 5/5/2017
670. I' Ll Quit Poetry..... [my Poemhunter Connection; Other Members; A Little Long] 1/12/2014
671. 'Poetic Pizza' Pieces For Poemhunter Pals....[fantasy Poem/Pizza Creation; Personal] 11/2/2013
672. Green: The Color... [green Things] 6/30/2013
673. (marriage) Equality..... [see The Title; Personal Fantasy; Humor? (Let Me Know) ] 11/27/2013
674. Fun-Eral....... [my Funeral; Relatives; Life And Death; Fun] 7/22/2013
675. Being Old: The Advantages And Disadvantages....... [(See The Title): Long; Personal? ; Humour? ] 11/12/2013
676. My English Sucks ….. [english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired] 8/29/2014

Comments about Bri Edwards

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (9/15/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    My Vote of Thanks!

    Dear Bri Edwards,

    I feel honored that you gave your precious time for evaluating My Scattered Thoughts series, I really treasure your time and substantial contribution according to which I'll edit my poems, and it is something I cannot reciprocate... or express my gratitude...There are many things we ignore simply or do not focus on punctuation and Grammar, and call it just a language barrier. Today I received your critique on Scattered Thoughts i, (and no.X already discussed) ...and I am enlightened about every point you discussed there. Your presence on the site is of substantial value for all of us...

    thank you so much...

    regards,
    Shahzia

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  • Aswath Raman (8/17/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Bri Edwards: I have alwas wondered how people are gifted with the talent of humor. Now, I have intentionally left the letter 'y' in always and I know if I did not tell that now, he'd correct me! An amazing poet Mr Bri Edwards and his level of crirical apprecition (darn! 'appreciation') with a pinch of humor is always great to look forward. A grammer (or grammar?) and spelling artist, he easily guides the poets for rectifying their mistakes and helps them to improve their work. I wish him all the success!

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/10/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    Dear Bri Edwards, well, ..your style in poetry is like a waterfall of light, unique and nice. the stories and the observations that had been inspired you to write such works _ also the art works_ (i mean poems) are cool. and they get the best score when you mix them with humanity(your previous poem that i read) .your messages those are in your poems are so wealthy. i am always your poem's reader and hope to see more poems from you in the future. thank you pal.
    Your pleasure is my wish
    Ellias.

Best Poem of Bri Edwards

My English Sucks ….. [english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

When I were schooled english wernt my thing.
My scores in English lurning no bells done ring.
Yea I grajaded but ain't english smart ….no lie!
Come end a school year the teach said 'By Bri.'

Was same in bilogy, math, jografy all that stuff.
I done did my best and guess my best were enough.
I did done grate at ball games and in trak run the mile.
I was a THREEletter man and made them girls smile.

I got payed for pumpin gas an turned 18 served my Nation.
For 'Bravry Under Fire' in the NAM I were town sensation.
Back home, all tired, I done gone back to the ...

Read the full of My English Sucks ….. [english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

Bri Is A Yodeling Fool

Stu said to me, Mr. Bri, : Let's go yodel-ing.
I, Bri, said: NO! I'll land my ass...IN a sling! .
But Stu was adamant; he thought it 'COOL'.....
.....to yodel. I thought Stu was a damn....FOOL!

But soon we were in the Swiss Alps, quite 'high'.
And a cute 'Swiss Miss' there made me sigh.
I yodeled for her day AND sometimes night.
I lost myself in yodeling; it was a true sad sight.

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