Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 82,960 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Bri Edwards Poems

241. A History Of The Future- What's That? ? .... [actc 2014/12 Poem; History/Future; Contest Entry; Ph Member Poets] 12/22/2014
242. Nasty Thoughts...... [emotions, Not Deeds; Very Short; Personal] 6/22/2014
243. A Limerick...... [a Limerick, As I 'see' It; Very Short, Of Course] 8/26/2013
244. If Cat For Mice....., Why Not.........? .....[predator/Prey; Housekeeping; Very Short; Humor] 8/14/2013
245. 'In-N-Out, Fast Food Stop........ [waiting For A Ride At A Restaurant; Simple Pleasures; Unruly Kids In Public; A Bit Of Humor; Short] 6/7/2013
246. Alphabet Fun...... [fun With Letters A, B, C, Etc.; My Rarely-Used Vocabulary; 'Bad' Vs. 'Good'] 11/26/2013
247. Dog House Days (As In 'In The Dog House') ............. [very Short; Personal; 'Bad, Bad! Husband; Humor/Humour] 11/27/2013
248. Rich Man Vs. Ghost....[religion; Humor] 8/24/2012
249. Handkerchief............... [the Word Origin Of 'Hankerchief'; Musings] 2/25/2013
250. Finger-Licking Bad...... [bad 'Tastes'; Oddities; Eccentricities] 2/24/2013
251. 'God Is So Creative.' - My Wife Said.....[god; Creation Of Creatures; God? ] 2/25/2013
252. Acting 5 Years Old....... [marriage/Relationship; Discord; Very Very Short; Humor? ] 5/17/2013
253. Armamentarium......[coincidences? ; Unfamiliar Word; Mystery; Personal] 2/8/2013
254. With..... [ With This And With That; A Poem Written 'by Mistake'; Very Short ] 6/30/2013
255. 'And This Year's Winner Is.....'...Who Cares? ....[birds Seeking Food; Very Short; Humour/Humor] 1/15/2013
256. Memories Of Times With My Little Girl (Shannon) .....(A Father's Memories; Personal; Short] 12/23/2012
257. Not That One Can'T Change Ones Mind......[following A Breakup; Short] 12/23/2012
258. Golden Eagle....[eagles: Hunting And Caring For Young] 12/26/2012
259. The Seeds That Listened And Took Action.....[fantasy; Wishes; Humor] 12/18/2012
260. Prejudiced? Who? Me? ? .....[personal; Human Nature; Racial Prejudice] 8/30/2012
261. Flying Into Tomorrow.....[short; Nature Observation; International Flight; Personal] 5/5/2012
262. While My Wife Is In Japan....Again......[personal; Retirement 11/13/2012
263. My Modest Life....[long; Personal; Humor] 11/17/2012
264. Shoe............[making Words; Humor] 12/11/2012
265. Think Of Me As Dead (Tomad) ........[communication; Aging; Humor; Sort Of Long] 12/11/2012
266. God And The Gas Pumps...........[religion; Creation; Short] 11/30/2012
267. A Mouse In My Stomach.....[long; Human Body; Animals] 11/30/2012
268. Finding Oneself......... [extremely Long; Growing Up; Relationships; Humour/Humor] 12/1/2012
269. A Bored Apple Seed............[humor, I Hope] 12/1/2012
270. Milk (The Food) ....... [very Short; The Versatile Liquid Food] 11/26/2013
271. Tv Tears ............... [very Short; Aspiring To View Tv; Personal; Humour/Humor] 11/27/2013
272. Smiles....... [very Short; Fooling With Words; I Know There Is A 'special' Name For This Type Of Poem, But I Forget What It Is; I Tried It With A Twist] 1/2/2014
273. Captain A's New Friends: Mahdi And Mehrdad..... [2 Limericks For My Ph Friend's New Friends; Short] 8/30/2013
274. I Awoke In The Emergency Room....... [a Rude Awakening; Lawsuits; Humor; Fantasy; Short] 6/22/2014
275. Peter's Pumpkin Eaters ..... [eating; Ph Title-'Challenge'; Retirement Pastime; Medium] 6/21/2014
276. Waiting...... [waiting; Humor; Very Short] 6/30/2014
277. When Your Old Dog Laughs Its Head Off (Like A Rolling Stone) ..... [ Response To A Ph Friend; Very Short; Humor] 7/4/2014
278. Proofreading ….. [bri's Ph Proofreading; Personal; Medium Length; Humor] 7/5/2014
279. The Hooting Dove ...... [birds; Personal; Selfishness; Very Short] 6/5/2014
280. Death In A Rhododendron …… [nature; Predator/Prey In-Miniature; Invertebrates; Medium] 6/10/2014

Comments about Bri Edwards

  • Janet Stewart (12/1/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    Bri thank you for your comments.

    1 person liked.
    2 person did not like.
  • Keith Fowler (9/23/2013 2:23:00 AM)

    Bri thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem it was much appreciated
    and fun.

    frendall

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (9/15/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    My Vote of Thanks!

    Dear Bri Edwards,

    I feel honored that you gave your precious time for evaluating My Scattered Thoughts series, I really treasure your time and substantial contribution according to which I'll edit my poems, and it is something I cannot reciprocate... or express my gratitude...There are many things we ignore simply or do not focus on punctuation and Grammar, and call it just a language barrier. Today I received your critique on Scattered Thoughts i, (and no.X already discussed) ...and I am enlightened about every point you discussed there. Your presence on the site is of substantial value for all of us...

    thank you so much...

    regards,
    Shahzia

  • Aswath Raman (8/17/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Bri Edwards: I have alwas wondered how people are gifted with the talent of humor. Now, I have intentionally left the letter 'y' in always and I know if I did not tell that now, he'd correct me! An amazing poet Mr Bri Edwards and his level of crirical apprecition (darn! 'appreciation') with a pinch of humor is always great to look forward. A grammer (or grammar?) and spelling artist, he easily guides the poets for rectifying their mistakes and helps them to improve their work. I wish him all the success!

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/10/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    Dear Bri Edwards, well, ..your style in poetry is like a waterfall of light, unique and nice. the stories and the observations that had been inspired you to write such works _ also the art works_ (i mean poems) are cool. and they get the best score when you mix them with humanity(your previous poem that i read) .your messages those are in your poems are so wealthy. i am always your poem's reader and hope to see more poems from you in the future. thank you pal.
    Your pleasure is my wish
    Ellias.

Best Poem of Bri Edwards

My English Sucks …..[english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

When I were schooled english wernt my thing.
My scores in English lurning no bells done ring.
Yea I grajaded but ain't english smart ….no lie!
Come end a school year the teach said 'By Bri.'

Was same in bilogy, math, jografy all that stuff.
I done did my best and guess my best were enough.
I did done grate at ball games and in trak run the mile.
I was a THREEletter man and made them girls smile.

I got payed for pumpin gas an turned 18 served my Nation.
For 'Bravry Under Fire' in the NAM I were town sensation.
Back home, all tired, I done gone back to the ...

Read the full of My English Sucks …..[english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

Bri Is A Yodeling Fool

Stu said to me, Mr. Bri, : Let's go yodel-ing.
I, Bri, said: NO! I'll land my ass...IN a sling! .
But Stu was adamant; he thought it 'COOL'.....
.....to yodel. I thought Stu was a damn....FOOL!

But soon we were in the Swiss Alps, quite 'high'.
And a cute 'Swiss Miss' there made me sigh.
I yodeled for her day AND sometimes night.
I lost myself in yodeling; it was a true sad sight.

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