Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 88,624 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Bri Edwards Poems

281. I Awoke In The Emergency Room....... [a Rude Awakening; Lawsuits; Humor; Fantasy; Short] 6/22/2014
282. The Hooting Dove ...... [birds; Personal; Selfishness; Very Short] 6/5/2014
283. Death In A Rhododendron …… [nature; Predator/Prey In-Miniature; Invertebrates; Medium] 6/10/2014
284. Pinched Nerve....... [back Problem; Personal; A Warning! ] 2/5/2014
285. Bri's New Year Resolutions: 2014....... [what It Says; Personal] 1/2/2014
286. Peace Cause May Be A Lost Cause..... [just What The Title Says; Very Short; Limerick] 1/20/2014
287. Boyhood Boxer............ [very Short; About A Dog And A....; Not To Be Confused With Men's Underwear] 3/5/2014
288. Death: I Brought Tears To Her Eyes..... [cutting My Life 'short'; Marriage-Matters; Personal (But You Can Read It) ] 3/1/2014
289. Milk (The Food) ....... [very Short; The Versatile Liquid Food] 11/26/2013
290. Tv Tears ............... [very Short; Aspiring To View Tv; Personal; Humour/Humor] 11/27/2013
291. Smiles....... [very Short; Fooling With Words; I Know There Is A 'special' Name For This Type Of Poem, But I Forget What It Is; I Tried It With A Twist] 1/2/2014
292. A Sonnet, Defined...... [as Per Paul Brookes; Not In Sonnet Form] 11/20/2013
293. With..... [ With This And With That; A Poem Written 'by Mistake'; Very Short ] 6/30/2013
294. Captain A's New Friends: Mahdi And Mehrdad..... [2 Limericks For My Ph Friend's New Friends; Short] 8/30/2013
295. Balloon Wishes....... [littering; Consumer Consequences; Me] 8/8/2013
296. Peter's Pumpkin Eaters ..... [eating; Ph Title-'Challenge'; Retirement Pastime; Medium] 6/21/2014
297. If Ruth Were A Flower.... [ruth Walters, Ph Member; 'Love' And Caring; Too Cute? ; Short] 9/27/2014
298. Bottoms Up *** .... [gluttony; Friendly Night Out; Hangovers Etc.; Almost More Than Short; Humor] 9/27/2014
299. Stallion Stew (Hard To Chew) .... [horses; Ethnic Food; Very Short; Very Serious] 8/24/2015
300. If You Got Lucky As A Kid........... [mothers; Short; Inspired By Clarence Prince's 'Mother' Poem] 8/27/2015
301. What Love Did To Me... [response To R.K. Hart's Ph Poem 'My Love Flies'; Husbandhood; Very Short] 7/30/2015
302. Eat, Drink, And Be Mary! .... [gender 'Change'; Humor/Humour; 'In The News'] 6/15/2015
303. Homeless? /B.O.! ….. [homeless? ; Mcdonalds; True Story] 5/2/2015
304. Fungie And Corm: An Unlikely Pair ….. [animal Fantasy; Inspired By Stephen Katona’s “fungie And The Cormorant”; Mixed-Marriages; Short] 5/23/2015
305. Gunslinger Ruthie [i Mean Lucy! ] … [vengeance; Inspired By Ruth Walter’s Poem “nobody Spoke (For Karen) ”; Short-Medium Length; Rejection] 5/24/2015
306. Mrs. Toad Meets Mr. Toad …. [toad Creation; Courtship; Humor; Short Enough] 4/26/2015
307. The-Saurus... [words; Dinosaurs; John Westlake; Fun] 4/11/2015
308. Diane Hine: Poet/Poetess.... [short; Rondeau, In Answer To Diane Hine] 4/6/2015
309. No Strings Attached! ....... [imagined 'wild-Guy's-Life'; Humor; Sinful? Behavior; Not Personal! ; Fairly Short] 9/23/2015
310. A Stone In My Briefs, While Driving In The 1987 Indy 500! ... [inspired By Kelly Kurt's 'stone In My Shoe'; Very Short; Humor/Humour] 10/14/2015
311. Friends: Jack C. Dental And Jon Purpose …..[long; Fiction; Friends Growing Up; Life] 11/9/2015
312. Death Be Mine! ... [inspired By Patti Masterman's ' I Die In Bits And Pieces ' On Ph; Death My Way; Personal] 11/19/2015
313. Damn! …. Dementia! ….. [inspired By A Message From Ph Friend Valsa G.; I Forgot To Capitalize In The Body Of The Poem] 11/20/2015
314. 40th-Year-Reunion Tears.... [fiction; Misunderstandings? ; Short Enough; Humor? ] 11/21/2015
315. A Showcase For P H Poets: D E C E M B E R 2015: Section ' C '...[11th Monthly Showcase Of Poems; This Section For 'medium' Length 2nd Or Late-Arriving Poems ] 11/27/2015
316. Bri: Rejected By Death.... [a Small Tale Inspired By Lorraine Colon's Poem: ' Pre-Mortem'; A Fib; Humour/Humor; Short] 2/10/2016
317. What Ever Happened To Privacy? ….[neighbors Are Watching; Humor? ; Fantasy & Fact; Personal; Medium Length] 2/8/2016
318. Fighting For Space In My Showcases …. [p H Poet-Friends And Such; Humor; A Little Long] 1/30/2016
319. Fighting For Space In My Showcases …. [ P H Poet-Friends And Such; Humor; A Little Long] 1/30/2016
320. Unconscious Most Of The Time ….. [short; Personal; Humor; Living Life In A Haze] 2/8/2016

Comments about Bri Edwards

  • Janet Stewart (12/1/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    Bri thank you for your comments.

    1 person liked.
    2 person did not like.
  • Keith Fowler (9/23/2013 2:23:00 AM)

    Bri thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem it was much appreciated
    and fun.

    frendall

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (9/15/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    My Vote of Thanks!

    Dear Bri Edwards,

    I feel honored that you gave your precious time for evaluating My Scattered Thoughts series, I really treasure your time and substantial contribution according to which I'll edit my poems, and it is something I cannot reciprocate... or express my gratitude...There are many things we ignore simply or do not focus on punctuation and Grammar, and call it just a language barrier. Today I received your critique on Scattered Thoughts i, (and no.X already discussed) ...and I am enlightened about every point you discussed there. Your presence on the site is of substantial value for all of us...

    thank you so much...

    regards,
    Shahzia

  • Aswath Raman (8/17/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Bri Edwards: I have alwas wondered how people are gifted with the talent of humor. Now, I have intentionally left the letter 'y' in always and I know if I did not tell that now, he'd correct me! An amazing poet Mr Bri Edwards and his level of crirical apprecition (darn! 'appreciation') with a pinch of humor is always great to look forward. A grammer (or grammar?) and spelling artist, he easily guides the poets for rectifying their mistakes and helps them to improve their work. I wish him all the success!

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/10/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    Dear Bri Edwards, well, ..your style in poetry is like a waterfall of light, unique and nice. the stories and the observations that had been inspired you to write such works _ also the art works_ (i mean poems) are cool. and they get the best score when you mix them with humanity(your previous poem that i read) .your messages those are in your poems are so wealthy. i am always your poem's reader and hope to see more poems from you in the future. thank you pal.
    Your pleasure is my wish
    Ellias.

Best Poem of Bri Edwards

My English Sucks …..[english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

When I were schooled english wernt my thing.
My scores in English lurning no bells done ring.
Yea I grajaded but ain't english smart ….no lie!
Come end a school year the teach said 'By Bri.'

Was same in bilogy, math, jografy all that stuff.
I done did my best and guess my best were enough.
I did done grate at ball games and in trak run the mile.
I was a THREEletter man and made them girls smile.

I got payed for pumpin gas an turned 18 served my Nation.
For 'Bravry Under Fire' in the NAM I were town sensation.
Back home, all tired, I done gone back to the ...

Read the full of My English Sucks …..[english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

Bri Is A Yodeling Fool

Stu said to me, Mr. Bri, : Let's go yodel-ing.
I, Bri, said: NO! I'll land my ass...IN a sling! .
But Stu was adamant; he thought it 'COOL'.....
.....to yodel. I thought Stu was a damn....FOOL!

But soon we were in the Swiss Alps, quite 'high'.
And a cute 'Swiss Miss' there made me sigh.
I yodeled for her day AND sometimes night.
I lost myself in yodeling; it was a true sad sight.

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