Bri Mar

Comments about Bri Mar

  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (3/23/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    You write very well. So much you can do to make this world a better place!

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  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (3/23/2014 11:18:00 PM)

    Superbly written! ! Very inspiring for someone who is trying to understand the meaning of one's existence. Thanks.

  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (3/23/2014 11:08:00 PM)

    Your poem 'Beauty is in the Eyes of the Beholder' is superb! Great depth! Lovely poem.

  • Kj Force Kj Force (3/23/2014 1:28:00 PM)

    Loved the flow of the words...beautifully written...

  • Kj Force Kj Force (3/23/2014 1:27:00 PM)

    Brian... rec'd an e-mail from this site.. with a poem by bri mar..Beauty is in the eyes of the beholde r..written/published in it is 2 years later, and presented as if it was just this person you? I loved the poem and the way the words flowed and painted a picture...I couldn't find a bri mar

Best Poem of Bri Mar

'' Not Just A Refugee ''

I was forced to leave my homeland,
My children and my wife,
To find a safer place to live,
Ultimately to save my life.

My decision wasn't taken lightly,
So please try to be aware,
We only want security,
For you to show you care.

What you take for granted,
We are not allowed,
While we must say things quietly,
You can shout out loud.

You can walk for miles on end,
Without the need for fear,
What we'd give to do the same,
That's our reason for coming here.

You can choose where you want to go,
We don't have that ...

Read the full of '' Not Just A Refugee ''

Black Or White ''

You say I'm white while others say black,
Why should my colour cause so much flak,
When you say I'm black it brings on a frown,
If you looked closer you'd see I am brown.

Across the world we come in differing shades,
As humans we all have unique facades,
Some are light while others are tanned,
Yet underneath we're all the same brand.

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