Bridgid Patrick

Rookie - 8 Points (London)

Bridgid Patrick Poems

81. Did Jesus Have A Dog? 10/13/2005
82. Politically Correct 3/7/2006
83. 3 Stages Of Grief 2/6/2006
84. Sotally Tober 2/16/2006
85. Abortion 10/10/2006
86. A Woman's Handbag 2/2/2006
87. The Vampire 4/21/2005
88. .rhyme Is A Crime 2/25/2006

Comments about Bridgid Patrick

  • Daniel Partlow Daniel Partlow (8/24/2007 11:36:00 PM)

    I think she's brilliant. I hope she keeps writing.

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  • Gina Onyemaechi (4/22/2006 8:20:00 AM)

    In her biography, Ms Patrick claims not to be a poet 'of any substance'. I feel that she is underselling herself: here is a highly intelligent, witty, feisty, and, above all, TALENTED young poet who packs a serious punch into just about everything that she pens. I enjoy nearly every single piece of her writing, my personal favourites including 'Rhyme Is a Crime', 'Little Jimmy Tattersall', 'Hand Job', and 'Do Not Disturb'. As she astutely observes in 'Great Unknown', she is indeed a great if obscure writer. It is my wish, however, that her works receive the wider audience that they fully deserve, and sooner rather than later. Bridg, allow me to offer you my full admiration and respect for your zesty, entertaining writing.
    Very best regards,
    Gina.

  • Tomás O Cárthaigh (2/26/2006 11:06:00 AM)

    'and every so often I put a pen to paper and voila! '

    Many poets of lesser abilty could do with your humility!

Best Poem of Bridgid Patrick

.rhyme Is A Crime

Since rhyming and rhythm are terribly boring
They must now be barred from all musical scoring;
Those poets employing these rhythms and rhymes
Should pay with their lives for committing such crimes!

Some nut must have thought that by using good meter
A poem with tempo would sound so much sweeter;
With stresses or accents to make the verse flow,
It's just a fine way to put on a good show!

The best of all verses, as anyone knows,
Are big healthy portions of random-thought prose;
Without rhyme or rhythm to get in ones head
It's easy to know what the ...

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Passion And Pain

It was you, you're the one who said to me it all has to end
It was you, you're the one that said that we should be friends
It was you who pulled the trigger, that led to my death
The same you that if i had to i would have given my last breath
Why does it hurt? Cos love is such a big mistery
Why does it hurt? things are never how you want them to be
Why did you leave? i would have given you all that i could
Why did you leave? to me everything was overly good
Life is a bitch, but drama isn

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