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Bharat Liberty 14 January 2015
i loved the way you expressed feelings sounds really happened
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Doris Cornago 20 December 2013
Hi Clawdea. I am glad to have known you through your poem. These are my favorite lines: this dark side that i kept fighting for so long that's just it, its all been there and has nothing to do with any other human Nobody can impose on you, or make you do things not comfortable or meaningful. A human being is complete all by himself/herself. I share this feeling, but also, that I need someone, and so must tell him, even if hopeless. I do not want to be bored with myself - it is best to be bored with somebody, and leave when boredom sets in. What if I get bored with myself? So, there, can you see the impracticality of having one's self for company all of the time? Can you tolerate mine? I would be most honored. Poetry is a good place to start a writing career. A story gets easier once you master the flow of emotions and rhythm of language. I suggest you try a story instead of a poem when the inspiration comes. I am a novelist before becoming a poet. You can see my first novel in amazon.com, The Spirit of Things, an outsourced piece.
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