Crystal Dawn

Rookie (May 17,1974 / Portsmouth, Virginia)

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  • Sofia P (5/18/2004 7:06:00 PM)

    Reading the Fetus I am questioning the grounds of poetry... Though I believe most your poems are very mature, I think for that specific one you still haven't decided if you want people to read it or feel it as you felt it when you wrote. The latter happened to me, and therefore my objection. I would have liked to be warned, and so far I believe poems warn you somehow by possessing that very character of 'a poem'... But then again, art doesn't have to be admired, not even accepted, to be good.

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Knocking At The Door

Lord, how long am I gonna keep tempting myself to sin?
I always push it too far.
Before I know it,
Sin's standing at my door,
Asking to come in.
I start to pray,
But the knocking is too loud.
I begin to justify that
You'll forgive me anyway,

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