Crystal Dawn

Rookie (May 17,1974 / Portsmouth, Virginia)

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  • Sofia P (5/18/2004 7:06:00 PM)

    Reading the Fetus I am questioning the grounds of poetry... Though I believe most your poems are very mature, I think for that specific one you still haven't decided if you want people to read it or feel it as you felt it when you wrote. The latter happened to me, and therefore my objection. I would have liked to be warned, and so far I believe poems warn you somehow by possessing that very character of 'a poem'... But then again, art doesn't have to be admired, not even accepted, to be good.

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Ode To Mary

The only best friend
My heart will ever know is you. And you
Are still the only one who can make tears
Roll down my cheeks from laughter.
You are my escape from reality to happiness.

No matter how many
Months it has been since we last talked, we
Can still come together as if we were never apart.

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