Daisymilk Riverflower


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  • Peter Dome Peter Dome (1/24/2013 3:48:00 AM)

    Really love this poem, love the bit about the colours. Very well done. A worthy 10. thank you for posting. Take care. Pete.

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Early Bought

Early bought sweater
Pink wool, she has just bought her sweater
Sitting in the waiting room, I can't help but notice
The tag hanging out,
Most probably tickeling her neck
How does she not notice?
Not remember to gently cut it off
Careful not to rip the very fibers that cover her body,
How does she forget that in public, she ignorently shows

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