Dani Baxter

Rookie - 25 Points [Dani Baxter] (10-13-1991)

Comments about Dani Baxter

  • Janelle Morehart (10/13/2006 12:41:00 AM)

    I love your poems, keep writing them, i love how blunt and sad they are, i love Childhood lost alot, its sad and very moving, i have written a few poems tob ut i have to say they arnt as good as yours, please keep writing

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  • Simon Zonenblick (11/30/2005 11:10:00 AM)

    These poems are clearly vividly felt, and succinctly expressed. You say you write 'depressing, morbid, evil' poetry, but there is no need to assume your range will not develop. With some attention to form and grammar, great rewards could be reaped. I think the 1st piece: A Childhood... is the most moving, and has the strongest imagery.

The Seagulls

The seagulls are so peaceful,
I wish I could join them,
Never having to hate,
Never having to hide,
Just being the same inside,

I wish I could fly away,
I wish I could leave this place,
I wish that one day I could fix all the hate,

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