Dani Baxter

Rookie - 25 Points [Dani Baxter] (10-13-1991)

Comments about Dani Baxter

  • Janelle Morehart (10/13/2006 12:41:00 AM)

    I love your poems, keep writing them, i love how blunt and sad they are, i love Childhood lost alot, its sad and very moving, i have written a few poems tob ut i have to say they arnt as good as yours, please keep writing

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  • Simon Zonenblick (11/30/2005 11:10:00 AM)

    These poems are clearly vividly felt, and succinctly expressed. You say you write 'depressing, morbid, evil' poetry, but there is no need to assume your range will not develop. With some attention to form and grammar, great rewards could be reaped. I think the 1st piece: A Childhood... is the most moving, and has the strongest imagery.

A 'Plastic Surgery' Tale

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She lies down the lights above her are hot and bright,
She's scared to death that she might die,
But the bigger they are, the better he said,
So they put the mask on her and she closed her eyes,

But what she felt next was a complete surprise,

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