No doubt about it: poetry for you is a craft, and it shows...
Just putting in writing what you already know- that I enjoy reading your work.
This is absolutely breath-takingly beautiful...you do have a way with words!
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme of this poem. As said before....very melodic.
Sincerely Sally Nesmith
She is the moonlight pallor, Dark water's cold caressEchoes in the shadow of midnight's kiss.On a single mote of her hair, For an eternity... ...I could gaze.Her dance is the rhythm of surrender; She moves above admonition