Dawson Walter Smith

Rookie - 61 Points (March 8,1988)

Comments about Dawson Walter Smith

  • Fallen Too Far (5/11/2006 6:49:00 PM)

    Dawson-(Walter?) i am standing here, and that's pretty much it. i am impressed.your poems have so much depth that they are not fathomable
    (infathomable?) . not fitting in is NEVER a bad thing, unless you're too big to fit into a mouse hole that has a billion gazillion dollers in it... sorry, that was kind of random, and it made no sense. but that's ok. because i like it. that's something else i like about your poems. they dont always make sense, but you just write them for the benifit of you, and releasing them to bleed, wether broken or healed, onto the page. keep it up, and remember, almost EVERY mouse hole is TOO small to fit into. hey, you're a good kid. just so you know. Luv, Marissa

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  • Mary Nagy (10/25/2005 11:56:00 AM)

    I've been reading through your poems and I enjoy them very much. You have so much intensity and it really comes through Dawson. Your bio is sad to me....I think many of us didn't 'fit in' when we were your age but you'll find the older you get, the less you really want to fit in. I think it's wonderful that you write. I look forward to reading more of your work as I've enjoyed what I've read so far. Sincerely, Mary

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A Roses' Petal

To walk the petal of a rose,
on a coffin under a tombstone.
Would mean to have walked the halls of the otherside,
yet still here above ground.

To look down from the sky,
and see the Cemetary.
Would give me a chance to breath,
And see life finally.

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